Writing 3

假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求，写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。

Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           

Best wishes,
Li Hua

【范文】
June 8
Dear Bob,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.
Our library is in the center of the school. There is a beautiful garden in front of it and our classroom
building is right behind it. The library is big. When you get inside, you will see many shelves full of books
on different subjects. There are also lots of newspapers and magazines. We borrow books and do some
reading in the library. According to the rule, every student can borrow up to 5 books each time and keep
them for 10 days. It is open from 9 am to 7pm from Monday to Friday and closed on weekends.
We all like our library very much.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【写作指导】
1. 认真读图，把握中心。
一般说来，所给的几幅图都是围绕一个中心展开的。注意说明的事物的特点
2. 初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。
在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。
尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。
3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。
运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。
4. 反复审核，修改错误。
一篇文章写好后，应进行检查，看短文中是否有错，如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误。

【亮点点击】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。本篇特色在于把图画中的信息分层次表达。先介绍图书馆的总体位置和周围环境，然后进入馆内，并说明借阅的规则和开放时间等信息，层次分明，使读者一目了然。文中还使用了高级表达，如When you get inside, you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects.运用了时间状语从句；Thank you for your last letter asking about our library.运用了非谓语动词；等。