假如你叫李军,你家于2017年被列为“精准扶贫”的帮扶对象,在政府两年的帮扶下,你家变化巨大。

(三十一)【2019 •四川省广元市】
假如你叫李军,你家于2017年被列为“精准扶贫”的帮扶对象,在政府两年的帮扶下,你家变化巨大。时值学校校报举办“家的变化”主题征文活动,请你根据以下内容要点,用英语写一篇70词左右的短文,参加本次活动。
内容要点:
过去 1. 家庭贫困,房屋破旧。
2. 母亲生病,为母担忧,成绩下滑。
现在 3. 住进新房,母亲康复,学习进步。
4. 生活日趋改善。
 
要求:1. 词数:70词左右。短文开头语已给出,但不计入总词数。
      2. 短文中必须包括所有要点,但不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥。
      3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years. __________
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参考范文
My name is Li Jun. Thanks to the government, my family has changed a lot in the last two years.(点题)
My family used to be poor and we lived in a small and old house.【高分句型一】I don't have any new clothes. My grades dropped because my mother was sick and couldn't afford to see a doctor. Sometimes, I even want to leave school to support my family.(过去)Now, with the help of the government, great changes took place in our lives. 【高分句型二】 We live in a new house. My mother is healthy. I can also set my mind on my study and make great progress in my study. Our life is improving day by day.(现在)

【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
My family used to be poor and we lived in a small and old house.
我家以前很穷,我们住在一个小和旧房子。used to do sth过去常常做某事。
【高分句型二】
Now, with the help of the government, great changes took place in our lives.
现在,在政府的帮助下,巨大的变化发生在我们的生活。with the help of 在……的帮助下。
 
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