话题作文:为了促进中小学生身心健康发展,我省自2018年3月1日起延迟中小学生到校时间,请你联系生活实际,谈谈对这一举措的看法。

6.(2018·黑龙江省中考真题)
话题作文:为了促进中小学生身心健康发展,我省自201831日起延迟中小学生到校时间,请你联系生活实际,谈谈对这一举措的看法。请以“My Opinions about the New Policy”为题,写一篇英语文章。
提示:1.原来的学习生活
2.延迟后的学习生活
3.个人感受(看法)
提示词:policy(政策) the time of arriving at school
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【答案】My Opinions about the New Policy
As we know, there is a new policy about putting off the time of arriving at school in the morning in our province.
I remember I had to get up early on school days and sometimes felt sleepy in class. If I got up late, I needed to have a quick breakfast.
Now I don' t need to get up so early that I can have enough sleep. I can keep energetic in class. What's more, I can also make good use of this period of time Reading books and doing exercise are good choices.
In a word, the new policy is good for our life and study.

【解析】
本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种时态,采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确,简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【点睛】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如:put off; get up ;in class.; make good use of ;be good for等;As we know ;Now ;What's more,;In a word等的运用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理;同时语言流畅,内容完整,是一篇不错的范文。
 
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