你的睡眠习惯是怎样的?是早睡早起的morning people,还是晚睡晚起的evening people?请以“A Morning or Evening People?”为题

(三十二)【2020•湖北省天门、仙桃、潜江、江汉油田】
你的睡眠习惯是怎样的?是早睡早起的morning people,还是晚睡晚起的evening people?请以“A Morning or Evening People?”为题,根据所给表格提示,写一篇短文,谈谈你对养成良好睡眠习惯,保持身体健康的认识。文中不得出现真实的人名和地名,词数不得少于80个词。
A Morning or Evening People?
写作提示 提示词
Beginning   sleeping habits
Body Part your parents’ sleeping habits; your seeping habit go to bed; get up; seeping hours
different ideas reasons
Ending   enough sleep; healthy body
 
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【写作思路】
本文是一篇话题作文,题目要求以“早睡早起的人还是晚睡晚起的人”为题写一篇文章,谈谈你对养成良好睡眠习惯,保持身体健康的认识。根据题目要求可知,本文时态为一般现在时,人称以第一和第三人称为主,注意主谓一致问题。
【参考范文】
A Morning or Evening People?
Different people have different sleeping habits. Some are morning people, some are evening people.
My parents are morning people. They go to bed early and get up early. They say there’s not much sleep for them at their ages. As for me, I never stay up late. I often go to bed before 9:00 pm, and get up early for school the next morning.
I think everyone should have good sleeping habits. They can help our bodies relax and rest well. Many studies show that it’s much healthier to go to bed early and get up early. I prefer to be a healthy morning people.
【名师点评】
本文结构紧凑,层次清晰。首段开门见山,点明文章主旨,即“早睡早起还是晚睡晚起”;第二段介绍父母的作息以及自己的作息习惯,通过对比突出良好作息的重要性;第三段浅谈自己对于养成良好睡眠习惯、保持身体健康的认识。文章要点齐全,逻辑清晰,简单明了的点明了自己的观点。另文章运用了正确的时态和人称,符合表达的需要。
高分亮点:
短语:go to bed;get up;stay up;prefer to do sth;help sb relax and rest well。
句型:that引导的宾语从句;it作形式主语;there be句型。
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