81.2020年初,一场突如其来的新型冠状病毒疫情开启了我们“停课不停学”的居家时光。某英文网站正在开展以“疫情下的我们”为主题的征文活动。

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81.2020年初,一场突如其来的新型冠状病毒疫情开启了我们“停课不停学”的居家时光。某英文网站正在开展以“疫情下的我们”为主题的征文活动。假如你是张鸣,请你根据以下要点提示用英文写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你在疫情期间的学习、生活情况及感受。
要点提示:1. 认真上网课,按时完成作业;
2. 广泛阅读,增长知识;
3. 看英语电影,听英文歌曲,放松自己;
4. 坚持锻炼,保证睡眠,保持健康;
5. 与父母交流,增进了解,分担家务;
6. 你的感受(1-2点)。
写作要求:1. 文章必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥以使行文连贯;
2. 词数:80词左右;(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
To prevent COVID-19 from spreading, I had to stay at home.
During the hard time, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文,要求以“疫情下的我们”为主题并根据题目中的要点提示写一篇文章,浅谈自己在疫情期间的学习、生活情况及感受。根据题目要求可知,本文时态为一般过去时,人称以第一人称为主,要注意文章的逻辑顺序,确保语句通顺流畅。
【参考范文】
To prevent COVID-19 from spreading, I had to stay at home.
During the hard time. I had online classes carefully and finished my homework on time. I also read a lot of books to increase my knowledge. Sometimes I watched English movies and listened to English songs to relax myself. In order to keep healthy, I kept on exercising and got enough sleep. What's more, I spent time talking with my parents. In this way, we understood each other better. In my spare time, I tried to help them with some housework.
All in all, I think it is an unforgettable experience in my life.
【名师点评】
本文结构紧凑,首段开门见山,直接点题;第二段按照题目的要点总结自己在疫情期间的学习、生活情况及感受;最后一段总结全文。文章运用了正确的时态和人称,符合表达的需要,且大多为简单的句式结构,清楚地表达了自己的情况及感受。
高分亮点:
短语:have to;on time;listen to;in order to;keep on doing;what's more;spend time doing sth;all in all。
句型:动词不定式作目的状语;think引导的宾语从句。
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