61.一场疫情悄然改变着我们的生活习惯。假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike想了解你们目前的用餐情况及你的看法,请你写一封电子邮件回复他。

(二十八)【2020•湖北省宜昌市】
61.一场疫情悄然改变着我们的生活习惯。假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike想了解你们目前的用餐情况及你的看法,请你写一封电子邮件回复他。
提示词:公筷 serving/public chopsticks;病毒 viruses;减少传染 reduce infections; safe
要求:
(1)内容应包含所给提示词:
(2)内容应包括餐前、餐中、餐后的情况介绍及你的看法;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;词数80~100。 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going? I’d like to tell you our lives have changed a lot because of the COVID-19. For dining habits,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
这是一篇书信作文。要求根据题目提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺,语意连贯,紧扣要点,注意句子之间的连接与过渡,要注意涵盖所给提示。
 
【参考范文1】
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going? I’d like to tell you our lives have changed a lot because of the COVID-19. For dining habits, public chopsticks and spoons are offered in many restaurants and homes before meals. And many people get food with public chopsticks and spoons instead of using their own when they eat together. People don’t go to crowded places any more after meals.
In my opinion, we should use public chopsticks and spoons more. Because it helps protect us from viruses and reduce infections. It can keep us safer and healthier. If all of us do it, we will have healthier dining habits.(82词)
Look forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文2】
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going? I’d like to tell you our lives have changed a lot because of the COVID-19. For dining habits, most people wash their hands carefully before meals. They use serving chopsticks instead of their own when they get food. They keep a safe distance when they eat together. And they don’t talk loudly any more. After meals, they often wear masks and take a walk.
In my opinion, these changes are good for us, especially using serving chopsticks. We should use them in order to reduce infections. It can protect us from catching viruses. So we can live a safer and healthier life. And I think it will become a daily habit that everybody should follow.(97词)
Look forward to hearing from you!
Your,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
以第一篇例文为例,例文一采用三段式;时态以一般现在时为主;将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中,适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解,表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点:
短语:instead of;not…any more;In my opinion;protect…from…等。
句型:And many people get food with public chopsticks and spoons instead of using their own when they eat together. 使用and连接的并列句和when引导的时间状语从句。
Because it helps protect us from viruses and reduce infections. 使用because引导的原因状语从句。
 
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