（二十五）【2020 •内蒙古通辽市】
41． 英语有句俗语：“Ten thousand lines can pull a boat.”从这句话中我们深刻体会到团队协作(teamwork)的重要性，请你分享一次团队协作的经历，如：体育运动，小组合作学习，团队游戏等，并谈谈你对团队协作的看法。
要求：
1.思路清晰，语句通顺，书写规范。
2.文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息。
3.词数:80词左右的短文。
Teamwork
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【写作思路】
该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示讲述自己团队合作的一次经历并发表对团队合作的看法。
【参考范文】
Teamwork
It is said that “Ten thousand lines can pull a boat.” Teamwork plays an important part in our daily life.
I still remember when I was in Grade 8, my physics was very poor. I had a really hard time with it. Once in class, I studied with some classmates together. I was very relaxed and asked my classmates a lot of questions about physics. I didn't feel stressed out at all. At last, I finished my homework by myself for the first time. How excited I was! Because of studying in groups, I am not worried about physics any more. I get more confidence with my classmates' help. It also gives me more chances to improve myself in many ways.
In my opinion, working in a team provides a chance for us to communicate with each other. It is a way to broaden our horizon and to establish our friendship with others. To sum up, to learn to work in a team is really necessary and important and we should try to enjoy it.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文主要用第一人称进行写作，讲述经历主要采用一般过去时态来写作。讲述自己团队合作的一次经历叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：plays an important part in；had a really hard time with；feel stressed out；at last；by myself; because of; am worried about; in my opinion; communicate with; broaden our horizon; to sum up。
句型：it做形式主义主语的句子；it is said that…句型；how引导的感叹句；and表示并列的句子；when引导的时间状语从句。
41． 英语有句俗语：“Ten thousand lines can pull a boat.”从这句话中我们深刻体会到团队协作(teamwork)的重要性，请你分享一次团队协作的经历，如：体育运动，小组合作学习，团队游戏等，并谈谈你对团队协作的看法。
要求：
1.思路清晰，语句通顺，书写规范。
2.文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息。
3.词数:80词左右的短文。
Teamwork
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示讲述自己团队合作的一次经历并发表对团队合作的看法。
【参考范文】
Teamwork
It is said that “Ten thousand lines can pull a boat.” Teamwork plays an important part in our daily life.
I still remember when I was in Grade 8, my physics was very poor. I had a really hard time with it. Once in class, I studied with some classmates together. I was very relaxed and asked my classmates a lot of questions about physics. I didn't feel stressed out at all. At last, I finished my homework by myself for the first time. How excited I was! Because of studying in groups, I am not worried about physics any more. I get more confidence with my classmates' help. It also gives me more chances to improve myself in many ways.
In my opinion, working in a team provides a chance for us to communicate with each other. It is a way to broaden our horizon and to establish our friendship with others. To sum up, to learn to work in a team is really necessary and important and we should try to enjoy it.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文主要用第一人称进行写作，讲述经历主要采用一般过去时态来写作。讲述自己团队合作的一次经历叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：plays an important part in；had a really hard time with；feel stressed out；at last；by myself; because of; am worried about; in my opinion; communicate with; broaden our horizon; to sum up。
句型：it做形式主义主语的句子；it is said that…句型；how引导的感叹句；and表示并列的句子；when引导的时间状语从句。
