56.“生命在于运动。”“运动兴,民族兴。”全民运动在中国蔚然兴起。假如你是一名初三学生

(三十三) (2020 •娄底市)
56.“生命在于运动。”“运动兴,民族兴。”全民运动在中国蔚然兴起。假如你是一名初三学生,你们学校的英语社团正在举办题为“Sports”的征文比赛。请根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文参赛。
1.要点:

 

2.要求:
(1)文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名等;
(2)语言要通顺,表达要正确;
(3)要求包含所有要点提示,为了行文需要,可适当拓展和增加要点;
(4)词数不少于60个英语单词,开头己给出,不计入总词数。
3.正文:
Life lies in movement. Nowadays, doing sports is becoming more and more popular in China._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作思路
本题为话题作文,要求以“Sports”为题写一篇文章。文章用现在时,人称用第一人称。
参考范文
Life lies in movement. Nowadays, doing sports is becoming more and more popular in China.
As for me, I like taking part in different kinds of sports, like football, basketball, walking, swimming and so on. And I also like to watch sports matches. My favorite sport is swimming. I look like a lovely fish in the swimming pool. I enjoy swimming because it can make me strong and healthy. It can also bring me a lot of happiness.
As we all know sports can keep us healthy, so now we students are encouraged to do sports. Doing sports can make us look good and feel good. And doing sports regularly can even help us sleep better at night.
【名师点评】
例文分三段,首段用于引出话题,点出国内运动变得越来越受欢迎的事实。第二段作者提到了自己参加过的运动以及最喜欢的运动。第三段则提到了做运动对学生的好处,建议学生多做运动。例文思路清晰,叙述流畅,包含题目所给要点,并进行了适当拓展,符合题目要求,是一篇合格的例文。
高分亮点:
短语:as for,take part in,different kinds of,and so on,look like,a lot of,as we all know。
句型:
(1)I enjoy swimming because it can make me strong and healthy.(because引导原因状语从句、make作使役动词)
(2)Doing sports can make us look good and feel good.(动名词短语作主语)

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