87. (B)2020年是不同寻常的一年。“新冠疫情”的爆发使我们的学习和生活发生了很大的变化,同时也引发了人们的思考。

(二十四)【2020 •黑龙江省牡丹江市】
87.    (B)2020年是不同寻常的一年。“新冠疫情”的爆发使我们的学习和生活发生了很大的变化,同时也引发了人们的思考。请你根据思维导图谈谈“新冠疫情”带给我们的影响以及我们从中得到的启示。要求:不少于90词,可适当发挥。

 

The outbreak of COVID-19 has made a big difference to our life. We have to ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作思路
本题为材料作文,要求就COVID-19的爆发以及其带来的影响写一篇文章。文章时态应用现在时或过去时,人称用第一人称。
参考范文
The outbreak of COVID-19 has made a big difference to our life. We have to stay at home instead of going out during the Spring Festival. It made us feel quite bored. Since we took online classes at home, there were no teachers or classmates around. We missed our teachers and classmates very much. All of us had to wear masks to protect ourselves from COVID-19 when going out.
What can we learn from the outbreak of COVID-19? First, we should develop healthy living habits to ensure us a healthy body and a good mood. Second, we should help others in need. Third, we should cherish every moment with our loved ones.
【名师点评】
例文点评:例文分两段,第一段写了COVID-19的爆发给我们生活带来的影响,第二段则写了疫情的爆发给我们带来的启示。例文思路清晰,叙述流畅,包含了所有题目所给要点,符合要求,是一篇合格的范文。
高分亮点:
短语:instead of,all of,protect sb. from,learn from。
句型:
(1)Since we took online classes at home, there were no teachers or classmates around.(since引导时间状语从句,there be句型)
(2)All of us had to wear masks to protect ourselves from COVID-19 when going out.(when引导的时间状语从句的省略形式)

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