66.技术进步带来学习方式的变化。假如你是李华,参与某英语报组织的关于两种学习方式的讨论。请根据报纸上提供的信息

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七、书面表达
66.技术进步带来学习方式的变化。假如你是李华,参与某英语报组织的关于两种学习方式的讨论。请根据报纸上提供的信息,谈谈你喜欢的其中一种学习方式及理由,并对这种学习方式提出你认为的不足。
Traditional learning in a classroom
● fixed timetable
a plan made by a school
● face-to-face communication
● colorful class activities
● team spirit
 
Modern learning on the Internet
● flexible(灵活的) timetable
 a plan made by oneself
● online communication
● rich learning resources
● any place with the Internet
 
要求:
1. 所写内容必须包括一种学习方式的所有信息;
2. 对你喜欢的学习方式说明理由,并提出你认为的不足;
3. 文章不少于90词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 语意通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
With the development of modern technology, the way of leaning is changing. I think____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作思路
本文是一篇材料作文,题目要求以李华名义就“学习方式”写一篇文章。题目列出了两种学习方式,一是传统的在教室学习,二是现代化的网上学习,要求选择其中一种自己喜欢的学习方式进行分析,谈谈这种学习方式特点、自己喜欢的理由以及存在的不足等,以上要点缺一不可。根据题目要求可知,本文时态为一般现在时,人称以第一人称为主,注意主谓一致问题。
参考范文
With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. I think I still prefer the traditional learning in a classroom. First, there is a fixed timetable. A clear plan is often made by a school, so I don't need to think about how to arrange when to learn different subjects. Second, we can have the face-to-face communication with both teachers and classmates. Third, there are colorful activities in class. In this way, I can learn the new knowledge happily. What's more, learning in the classroom can help me develop a sense of team spirit, so I can learn how to get along with others.
However, when I study in the classroom, sometimes I can't follow my teacher. And learning in the classroom can't provide enough resources for me to choose from.

【名师点评】
例文点评:本文结构紧凑,层次清晰。第一段介绍了自己喜欢的学习方式以及自己为什么喜欢的理由;第二段介绍了传统学习方式的不足。文章要点齐全,逻辑清晰,使读者一目了然。另本文使用了正确的时态和人称,符合表达的需要。
高分亮点:
短语:with the development of;think about;in this way;what's more;get along with。
句型:there be句型;疑问词+动词不定式;when引导的时间状语从句。
 
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