81.阳光中学的英语社团下周将举行一次座谈会,主题为“幸福都是奋斗出来的”。假如你是魏华,将参与座谈。

(十五)【2020 •南通市】
八、书面表达 
81.阳光中学的英语社团下周将举行一次座谈会,主题为“幸福都是奋斗出来的”。假如你是魏华,将参与座谈。请根据以下图片提示,联系自身实际,从德、智、体、美、劳等方面中选取至少三个方面写一篇英语发言稿,谈谈自己将如何努力奋斗。

 

注意:1. 词数90左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Wei Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. I’m happy to be here to share my ideas. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
写作思路
题目要求以“幸福都是奋斗出来的”为主题,结合图片提示,完成英语发言稿,开头和结尾已经给出,补充剩余内容即可。
参考范文
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Wei Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. I’m happy to be here to share my ideas. I think happiness is achieved through hard work.
Firstly, helping others will make us feel happy. For example, we should give our seats to the elderly when we take a bus. After we see their smiling faces, we must be happier too.Secondly, healthy bodies can bring us happiness. Health is important to everyone. Only when we keep healthy, we can work and study happily. So we should keep doing exercise every day. Thirdly, knowledge makes our life colorful and interesting. In our free time, we are willing to learn different kinds of skills (like computer and art) so that we can serve the society better. Finally, the beautiful environment gives us a comfortable feeling. We should plant more trees to protect the environment. We also work as volunteers and clean up the parks.

That’s all. Thank you!

【名师点评】
例文点评:例文采用三段式结构,第一段点明“幸福都是奋斗出来的”这一主题,第二段结合自身实际,从不同的方面讲述了自己该如何奋斗,第三段是结束语;整篇文章内容完整,结构清晰条理;人称主要是第一人称,时态主要是一般现在时。
高分亮点:
短语:make sb. do sth.;give one’s seat to sb.;for example;keep doing sth.;in one’s free time;be willing to do sth.;different kinds of。
句型:so that引导的目的状语从句;when引导的时间状语从句。

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