VII. 书面表达
76.2020年6月23日上午，淮安市首届以 “龙舟竞渡迎端午” 为主题的大运河龙舟公开赛在淮安清江浦区隆重开幕。这项活动的开展不仅弘扬了中国传统文化，也给人们带来了生活的乐趣。
请围绕 “端午节” 这话题写一篇短文，内容包括以下要点：
1. 叙述你今年如何度过端午小长假（包括时间、地点、人物、经过）；
2. 你对这些活动的感悟（活动的意义，……）；
3. 今后，你将如何弘扬祖国传统文化（经常参加有关传统文化的活动，……）
参考词汇：
聚餐have big dinner；      看龙舟赛watch the dragon boat race；
包粽子make rice dumplings；讲屈原的故事tell the story of Qu Yuan.
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
2. 词数在80-100之间, 已给出的文字不计入总词数。
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival in our country.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文，写一篇短文介绍一下今年如何度过端午小长假，对这些活动的感悟以及将如何弘扬祖国传统文化，叙述如何度过端午小长假时用一般过去时，表达感悟时可用一般现在时和一般将来时，人称上主要用第一人称和第三人称。
【参考范文】
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival in our country. I’ll never forget this year’s Dragon Boat Festival. I had a good time on vacation. I did a lot of interesting things. I helped my mother make rice dumplings. It was difficult but fun. Then I had a big dinner with my family. It was a happy time to be with my family. My parents told me the story of Qu Yuan. I learned a lot about Chinese history and culture. One of the most exciting things was watching the dragon boat races. People did these activities in order to let the people old and young remember poet Qu Yuan. These activities not only carry forward the traditional Chinese culture, but also bring people the joy of life.
In my opinion, I think we should hold more activities to celebrate the Chinese traditional festival. Festivals play an important part in Chinese culture. It is our duty to respect the traditions and make Chinese culture known to the world.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。
高分亮点：
短语： have a good time；help sb. do sth.；one of the most exciting things；in order to ；bring people the joy of life；play an important part in。
句型：①动词不定式表目的 People did these activities in order to let the people old and young remember poet Qu Yuan.
②形式主语 It is our duty to respect the traditions and make Chinese culture known to the world.
③宾语从句 In my opinion, I think we should hold more activities to celebrate the Chinese traditional festival.