为了鼓励人们积极向他人传递关爱,某青少年英文网站“The Link of Love”(爱的链接)专栏开展征文活动。

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B. 书面表达
51.请根据要求完成短文写作,并将作文写在答题卡指定的位置。
为了鼓励人们积极向他人传递关爱,某青少年英文网站“The Link of Love”(爱的链接)专栏开展征文活动。请你给该专栏投稿。
内容包括:
(1)你想向谁表达你的关爱?为什么?
(2)你打算做些什么来表达你的关爱?
作文要求:
(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头己经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。
We are growing up in love and care from people around. It is important to love and care for others._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作思路
本题为材料作文,要求根据题目所给要点提示表达对某个人或群体的爱。时态可用过去、现在、将来时,人称用第一人称。
参考范文
We are growing up in love and care from people around. It is important to love and care for others. I love my mum. She gave me life, and taught me a lot.
Next Sunday will be Mother’s Day, in order to show my love for my mum, I decide to do something for her. First, I will book a singing room for my mother. I know she likes singing and dancing. Second, I will buy a beautiful gift for her. It will make her very happy. Third, I will do the housework that day and let her have a good rest.
I really hope she will have a good time on that day!

【名师点评】
例文点评:例文分三段,第一段用于开篇点题,引出“表达对某个人或群体的爱”这一文章主题,第二段则是叙述了母亲对自己的爱,以及自己准备如何在母亲节这一天回报母亲的爱。第三段以对母亲的美好祝愿做文章结尾。例文思路清晰,层次分明,句与句之间衔接自然流畅,感情真挚,是一篇优秀的范文。
高分亮点:
短语:in order to,buy sth. for sb.,make sb. adj.,do the housework,have a good rest,have a good time。
句型:
(1)I know she likes singing and dancing.(宾语从句)
(2)It will make her very happy.(make作使役动词)
(3)Third, I will do the housework that day and let her have a good rest.(and连接的并列句)
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