61.假如你是李明,某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容,写一篇题为“A Letter to My Parents”的短文,用于投稿。

(九)【2020 •浙江省金华市】
61.假如你是李明,某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容,写一篇题为“A Letter to My Parents”的短文,用于投稿。
注意:1. 文中必须包含三个方面的内容要点,可适当发挥;参考词汇供选择使用;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100;
4. 文章的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
内容要点 参考词汇
Parents’ care cook food, take…to and from school, look after…
Parents’ love trust, advise, encourage…
My thanks
 
 
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad.
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Love from
Li Ming
写作思路
这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“A Letter to My Parents”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺,语意连贯,紧扣要点,注意句子之间的连接与过渡,要注意涵盖所给提示。
参考范文
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
I'm writing to express my thanks for all your care and love.
All these years, you have done so much. Almost every day, Mum cooks delicious food for me and Dad takes me to and from school. When I'm sick, you look after me carefully and patiently.
Both of you always trust me and care a lot about my school life and personal feelings. The many talks we have had and the advice you have given me help me grow. The encouragement from you helps me fear no difficulties and troubles.
Thanks again for everything you have done for me.
Love from
Li Ming
【名师点评】
 
例文点评:例文采用四段式;时态以一般现在时为主;将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中,适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解,表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点:
短语:express one’s thanks for…;take…to…;look after;Both of等。
句型:When I'm sick, you look after me carefully and patiently.
The many talks we have had and the advice you have given me help me grow
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