72.在你校"劳动教育月"期间,校英语报发起了"A Helper at Home"主题征文活动。请结合自身情况,用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你经常做的两项家务以及你的收获。内容要点提示如下:

What you often do at home	What you have learned
◆ water flowers     ◆ cook meals ◆ wash the dishes    ◆ look after pets ◆take out the rubbish  ◆……	◆life skills ◆ responsibility（责任） ◆……

 
注意:
(1)表格中的内容要点仅供选择使用,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3)词数:80~100。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。
短文首句:I have always been a good helper at home.
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【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，在你校“劳动教育月”期间,校英语报发起了“A Helper at Home”主题征文活动。要求结合自身情况，根据提示内容，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈自己经常做的两项家务以及收获。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
【参考范文】
 
A Helper at Home
    I have always been a good helper at home. As we all know, it’s important to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help them to do housework.  Last Sunday，after breakfast，I began to help my parents wash clothes. Though washing clothes isn’t difficult, it took me a long time. After that, I tried to tidy my bedroom. I first made the bed and then put away my clothes and school things. Looking at the tidy room, I felt tired but satisfied because I not only share the housework for my parents, but also learn life skills.
I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：本文按照题目的要求，介绍了自己所做的两项家务，结构清晰，要点全面；文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且还使用了一些较好的句式，增强了文章的连贯性。
2.高分亮点：
短语：help sb to do sth，try to do，put away，not only…but also…。
句型：I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. 我认为能让我的父母工作后感到开心。I think后加省略了that的宾语从句。
In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be. 总之，我的家务活做的越多，我的父母就会越快乐。the+比较级，the+比较级：越……就越……。