76.良好的习惯让人受益终身。如何培养良好的习惯?请根据以下内容提示,以“How To Develop A Good Habit"为题,用英语写一篇短文

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76.良好的习惯让人受益终身。如何培养良好的习惯?请根据以下内容提示,以“How To Develop A Good Habit"为题,用英语写一篇短文,可以适当发挥。
要点:
(1)坚持锻炼,不要熬夜,睡眠充足;
(2)多吃水果蔬菜,少吃垃圾食品:
(3)努力学习,广泛阅读:
(4)体貼父母,多做家务;
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注意:
(1)要点齐全,条理清晰,语句通顺,不需逐条翻译;
(2)文中不得出现姓名、校名等真实信息:
(3)短文不少于80 词。
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写作思路
文章是一篇话题作文,主要以“How to develop a good habit”为话题展开讨论,要根据题目中所给出的要点描写,把每一个要点写清楚写具体即可,要注意语言的表达要清楚。
参考范文
 
How to develop a good habit
It’s very important for us to develop good habits. As teenagers, what should we do?
In my opinion, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes if they are necessary for us. It is a good habit to finish the schoolwork on time every day. In spare time, we had better read some books to get more knowledge. Also, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food. It’s necessary for us to take exercise for three or four times a week. What’s more, to get enough sleep, we should go to bed early and shouldn’t stay up late. Always remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean. Exercise is fun and relaxing. It’s healthy for the mind and body. Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily. Last but not least, when we have time, we should help our parents do some housework. We should be considerate of our parents because they work hard every day.
Good habits will make our study twice the result with half the effort. Let’s form good habits together!

【名师点评】
1. 例文点评:文章采取三段描写。第一段总体指出好习惯的重要性并提出该如何做;第二段分别从几个方面具体描写要养成好习惯;第三段总体概括好习惯会事半功倍。整个文章结构完整思路清晰,语言表达准确流畅,意思明确易懂。
2. 高分亮点:
短语:in my opinion;listen to;take notes;on time;had better do sth;take exercise;What’s more;last but not least。
句型:if引导的条件状语从句;It’s adj for sb to do sth;when引导的时间状语从句;动词原形开头的祈使句。
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