51.少年智则国智,少年强则国强。根据下图提示写一篇英语短文, 描述作为青少年的你们将如何成长,并说明原因或目的。

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51.少年智则国智,少年强则国强。根据下图提示写一篇英语短文, 描述作为青少年的你们将如何成长,并说明原因或目的。除了提示中的内容,请你至少再补充一条。


build up our bodies by…;
keep strong and healthy

 

develop some interests;
for example,…;
make ourselves fully developed

do housework; such as…;
help parents; learn to be independent (独立的)

?

 

要求:
1、语言通顺, 要点齐全, 意思连贯, 条理清楚, 书写规范;
2、文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
3、80~100词, 文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
As teenagers, we are the future of our homeland. We should develop ourselves fully. But how? Here is my opinion.
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写作思路
这篇作文要求我们根据提示并至少再补充一条,写一篇英语短文, 描述青少年将如何成长,并说明原因或目的。在写作时,我们可以列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达,根据需要将这些信息进行重新整理和安排,使文章的意思更自然。可以使用一些好的句型和连词,使文章上下文意思连贯。
参考范文
As teenagers, we are the future of our homeland. We should develop ourselves fully. But how? Here is my opinion.
Basically, we should build up our bodies by taking some exercise, doing some sports, such as running, swimming, playing basketball and so on. In this way, we can keep ourselves strong and healthy/we will grow up strong and healthy.
What's more, developing some interests is a good way to make ourselves fully developed. We can learn to play the piano, sing songs, dance, collect stamps, draw pictures and so on. As a saying says. "You can never learn too much."
In addition. I think it's our duty to do some housework at home. We should help do some cleaning, water the flowers or walk the dog. Then our parents can live an easier life. Also, by doing this, we can learn to be independent and get ourselves well prepared for the future life.
If we do these things well, we will be able to grow up as a fully developed person.

【名师点评】
1.例文点评:本文时态为一般现在时,人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,表述准确,语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。
2.高分亮点:
短语:build up;in this way;keep ourselves strong;what's more;in addition;live an easier life。 
句型:宾语从句I think it's our duty to do some housework at home.
条件状语从句If we do these things well, we will be able to grow up as a fully developed person.

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