82.本学期，我省中小学采取网上授课的教学方式。有些同学取得很大进步，也有些同学成绩下滑。对此，你有什么看法呢？ 请以“What do you think of learning online? ”为题，谈谈你的切身感受。
提示信息：
1）网络直播课是学校避免疾病传播的一种教学方式：（spread 传播 v.）
2）作业形式丰富多样：（all kinds of）
3）课后可以观看回放：（playback 回放n.）
4）一些同学对自己要求不严格、不认真听讲、不按时完成作业；
5）Wi-Fi不好，导致网课不能顺利进行：（go on well）
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What do you think of learning online?
At the beginning of this term, we started having online lessons. Some students made great progress, while others found themselves far behind their classmates.
As for me, I think…__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文要求根据所给信息，以“What do you think of learning online? ”为题，谈谈你的切身感受。首先认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；我们需要用正确的英语把所给出的要点表达出来，然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
 
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What do you think of learning online?
At the beginning of this term, we started having online lessons. Some students made great progress, while others found themselves far behind their classmates.
As for me, I think learning online is a teaching method to avoid the spread of disease in schools, and the homework is of various forms. We can record videos and share them with our classmates online.
One of the advantages of online teaching is that the video lesson can be played back after class. It means you can re-read what you don't understand, which is of course very beneficial to students.
However, every coin has two sides. Some students are not strict with themselves. They do not listen carefully or finish their homework on time. If a student is managed by a teacher in class, of course he may be more serious. But if teaching online, the teacher can't see what they are doing, the probability of a student wandering is probably much higher than before.
What’s more, If Wi-Fi is not good, it will cause the online lessons not to go on well.
I think students should communicate with teachers on the network teaching platform. Through communication, students can get answers to questions. Teachers can also understand the students and encourage students to learn.
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：文章在介绍的时候时态用一般现在时，人称用第三人称，文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
2.高分亮点：
短语：share… with；the advantages of；What’s more；communicate with；encourage students to learn.
句型：which引导非限制性定语从句。It means you can re-read what you don't understand, which is of course very beneficial to students.
宾语从句I think students should communicate with teachers on the network teaching platform.