101.全球新冠疫情依然严峻,而我国的疫情防控成就令人瞩目,全国万众一心,团结抗疫的画面令我们永生难忘。

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101.全球新冠疫情依然严峻,而我国的疫情防控成就令人瞩目,全国万众一心,团结抗疫的画面令我们永生难忘。你的美国笔友Michael想了解你对此的所见所闻和所思所想。请你根据下面的提示内容,回一封邮件。
提示:
(所见所闻)我们政府采取了很多措施,执行(carry out)隔离(quarantine)治疗( reatment)的政策(policy);兴建(build)许多特殊的(special)医院;许多优秀的(excellent)医护人员自愿(volunteer)去帮助灾区(disaster areas).
(所思所想)作学生,我们要保护好自己,比如……(至少两点);希望全世界人民……。( work together; save more lives)
要求:
1. 80词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 句子通顺,语意连贯,符合逻辑;
3. 必须包含所有提示内容,但不要逐字逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
4. 务必书写正确规范,卷面整洁。
Dear Michael,
I’m glad to receive your e—mail. Now I’d like to share my opinions with you. Since COVID—19 broke out, our government has taken many measures. First______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
写作思路
对于写作题考生需认真审题,全面了解写作要求,理清思路,确定短文体裁、框架结构和写作内容。本文要求就新冠疫情向美国笔友Michael写信介绍自己的所见所闻和所思所想,属于书信类写作。写作时需要注意格式正确,用第一人称进行叙述。
参考范文
Dear Michael,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail. Now I’d like to share my opinions with you. Since COVID-19 broke out, our government has taken many measures. First, we have carried out quarantine treatment policy. Second, many special hospitals have been built. Third, many excellent doctors and nurses volunteered to help the people who lived in the disaster areas. As students, we must protect ourselves. For example, keep our home clean and often open the window to keep the fresh air. Try to avoid going outside or going to places where there are many people. Wash your hands as often as possible, especially before meals and after returning from public places. Whats more, we should wear a mask when going out. I
I hope the people all over the world will work together to save more lives.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
 
【名师点评】
1.例文点评:本文首先直入主题I’d like to share my opinions with you,然后分别介绍政府的三点防疫举措和个人的防护措施,最后表达希望I hope the people all over the world will work together to save more lives。本文是“总分总”结构,以第一人称为主,用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时三种时态展开陈述;内容充实,结构完整,方法合理,表达流畅,条理清晰,是一篇优秀的习作。
2.高分亮点:
高分短语:would like to do share sth. with sb., as students, stay at home, go out, carry out, volunteer to do, live in, for example, try to do , avoid doing, as often as possible, what’s more, all over the world.
高分句型:
1). Third, many excellent doctors and nurses volunteered to help the people who lived in the disaster areas.(定语从句)
2). For example, keep our home clean and often open the window to keep the fresh air.(并列祈使句结构)
3). I hope the people all over the world will work together to save more lives.(宾语从句)
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。例文中,First, Second, Third, What’s more等词的运用,增强了本文的条理性。
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