81.某英语网站正在开展关于良好生活习惯的征文大赛,请以“Good Living Habits Make Me ________”为题

(二)【2020 •贵州省安顺市】
81.某英语网站正在开展关于良好生活习惯的征文大赛,请以“Good Living Habits Make Me ________”为题,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文参加此次大赛。
要求如下:
1.补全标题;
2.征文应包含第一节所有信息(1. What’s your favorite food? 2. How often do you exercise? 3. How many hours do you sleep every night? 4. How do you relax yourself in your daily life? 5. What do you think of your living habits?);
3.重点谈谈良好的生活习惯对你的积极影响和作用;
4.征文中不得出现考生真实的个人信息。
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写作思路
本题为话题作文,要求补充完题目“Good Living Habits Make Me ________”后写一篇短文。文章时态用现在时或过去时,人称用第一人称。
参考范文
Good Living Habits Make Me Healthier
Good living habits are important in our lives. They influence us in many ways. I think good living habits make me healthier.
I used to prefer meat to fruit or vegetables. But now I try all kinds of food. What’s more, I like sports, and I exercise for 30 minutes every day. Everyone needs sleep. I have eight to ten hours’ sleep at night. With enough sleep at night, I can be ready for school activities. In spare time I’d like to do some reading. It makes me feel relaxed.
I think my living habits are pretty healthy. Developing good living habits was quite difficult for me at the beginning, but now I am used to it and enjoy it. I look much stronger than before. I think it is good living habits that make me healthier and healthier.

【名师点评】
1.例文点评:例文分三段,第一段用于引出Good Living Habits Make Me Healthier这一话题,第二段则根据第一节的五个要点对自己的良好生活习惯进行了描述,第三段则对自己的生活习惯进行了评价并肯定了健康生活习惯给自己带来的积极影响。例文层次分明,思路清晰,叙述流畅,文中用了许多高分句型及短语,为文章增色不少。
2.高分亮点:
短语:used to do,prefer … to …,all kinds of,what’s more,be ready for,at the beginning。
句型:
(1)What’s more, I like sports, and I exercise for 30 minutes every day.(and连接的并列句)
(2)I think good living habits make me healthier.(宾语从句)
(3)Developing good living habits was quite difficult for me at the beginning, but now I am used to it and enjoy it.(动名词作主语)
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