40.“不积跬步，无以至千里。”积累，有助于我们达成目标，实现梦想。
某英文网站正在开展以“积累”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。
提示词语：accumulate（积累）, read, keep, make progress
提示问题：●What did you do to accumulate knowledge?
                    ●What have you learned from doing so? Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作思路】
本题属于材料作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据提示词语和提示问题来写一篇短文，谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么，有什么收获。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. As for me, I have taken lots of measures to accumulate knowledge. First of all, I attentively listened to the teachers, parents, and the others who could provide me with much knowledge, considering that it was one of the most effective ways to enrich myself. In the second place, I used to observe something carefully and took note at the same time so that I would not miss anything important. Last but not least, when having spare time, I chose to read various books and reviewed what I had gained regularly.
In a word, I have learned a lot during the process of accumulating knowledge. Just as an old saying goes, Rome was not built in one day. That is to say, one cannot succeed without persistent accumulation. So I have learned that only by gaining knowledge step by step can we achieve our goal and realize our dream. In the future, I will continue to keep accumulating knowledge and make greater progress.
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，用上了所给提示词并回答了“你是如何积累知识的？”和“你从中学到了什么？”这两个问题。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
2. 高分亮点：
单词和短语：as for；take lots of measures to do sth.；first of all；provide sb. with sth.；used to do sth.；at the same time；last but not least；in a word；step by step；make progress。
句型：who引导的限制性定语从句；that引导的宾语从句；so that引导的目的状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；what引导的宾语从句；以only开头的倒装句。