66. 假定你是李华,你校学生会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:1. 写信目的;2. 个人优势(口语能力;相关经验);3. 希望获准。

66. 假定你是李华,你校学生会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:1. 写信目的;2. 个人优势(口语能力;相关经验);3. 希望获准。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信得开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua. Learning that you are recruiting some volunteers to receive the visiting foreign students, I’d like to apply for the job.
To begin with, I have a good command of spoken English, thus making it easy for me to communicate with foreign students. What’s more, I have also taken part in several such activities, which equips me with rich experience in receiving foreign students.
If accepted, I would try to live up to your expectations. I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给学生会写封信,申请成为志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 写信目的;
2. 个人优势(口语能力;相关经验);
3. 希望获准。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
recruit; foreign; volunteer; apply for; have a good command of; spoken English; communicate with; take part in; rich experience in; live up to one’s expectations; appreciate; application
第三步:连词成句
1. Learning that you are recruiting some volunteers to receive the visiting foreign students, I’d like to apply for the job.
2. To begin with, I have a good command of spoken English, thus making it easy for me to communicate with foreign students.
3. What’s more, I have also taken part in several such activities, which equips me with rich experience in receiving foreign students.
4. If accepted, I would try to live up to your expectations.
5. I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系:What is more
2.表因果关系:Thus
3.表文章结构顺序:To begin with
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you are recruiting some volunteers to receive the visiting foreign students, I’d like to apply for the job. (运用了现在分词作状语以及that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] What’s more, I have also taken part in several such activities, which equips me with rich experience in receiving foreign students. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
 
 
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