（七）【2020•吉林省】
76.假如你是李华，你所在的学校即将开展以“文明礼貌伴我行争做文明中学生”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请完成下面的演讲稿。
内容包括：
1. 列举生活中至少两种不文明现象并写出各自产生的影响；
2. 提出至少三条争做文明中学生的建议；
3. 发出争做文明中学生的号召。
写作要求：
1. 词数80—100词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现真实的学校名称和姓名；
3. 可以适当发挥。
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
【写作思路】
该题目属于演讲稿写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据内容提示列举生活中至少两种不文明现象并写出各自产生的影响，提出至少三条争做文明中学生的建议并发出争做文明中学生的号召。
【参考范文】
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However, some bad behavior can be seen around us. For example, some students throw rubbish everywhere, which makes the environment worse and worse. Some students are always shouting back angrily to their parents gradually the relations between them have become difficult.
How can we behave well? First, I think we should be polite and kind to others. Be ready to help others in need. Second, try to be honest and keep promises. The most important thing is to follow the rules at school or in public.
Let's pull together and take action from now on.
I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves.
That's all Thanks for listening!
例文二：
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However, we can hear some students talk loudly on the bus. What's worse, some students smoke in public places. These may make others uncomfortable and smoking is harmful to people's health to be better students.
We should think of others and keep the voice down in public. And we should follow the traffic rules to make sure we are safe. Besides, we should try to be honest students and we shouldn't lie to others.
Let's pull together and take action from now on.
I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文主要用第三人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作。讲述争做文明中学生的建议分成三点来写，叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：care more about; in fact; for example; throw rubbish; shouting back; behave well; in need; try to; keep promises; follow the rules; pull together; take action; from now on；what's worse; is harmful to; think of; keep the voice down; in public; make sure; lie to。
句型：I think… 宾语从句；which引导的定语从句；as long as引导的条件状语从句；we should do表示建议的句子。
76.假如你是李华，你所在的学校即将开展以“文明礼貌伴我行争做文明中学生”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请完成下面的演讲稿。
内容包括：
1. 列举生活中至少两种不文明现象并写出各自产生的影响；
2. 提出至少三条争做文明中学生的建议；
3. 发出争做文明中学生的号召。
写作要求：
1. 词数80—100词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现真实的学校名称和姓名；
3. 可以适当发挥。
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
【写作思路】
该题目属于演讲稿写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据内容提示列举生活中至少两种不文明现象并写出各自产生的影响，提出至少三条争做文明中学生的建议并发出争做文明中学生的号召。
【参考范文】
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However, some bad behavior can be seen around us. For example, some students throw rubbish everywhere, which makes the environment worse and worse. Some students are always shouting back angrily to their parents gradually the relations between them have become difficult.
How can we behave well? First, I think we should be polite and kind to others. Be ready to help others in need. Second, try to be honest and keep promises. The most important thing is to follow the rules at school or in public.
Let's pull together and take action from now on.
I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves.
That's all Thanks for listening!
例文二：
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Nowadays, people care more about our grades. In fact, good behavior is as important as good grades. However, we can hear some students talk loudly on the bus. What's worse, some students smoke in public places. These may make others uncomfortable and smoking is harmful to people's health to be better students.
We should think of others and keep the voice down in public. And we should follow the traffic rules to make sure we are safe. Besides, we should try to be honest students and we shouldn't lie to others.
Let's pull together and take action from now on.
I believe we'll be better students as long as we behave ourselves.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文主要用第三人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作。讲述争做文明中学生的建议分成三点来写，叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：care more about; in fact; for example; throw rubbish; shouting back; behave well; in need; try to; keep promises; follow the rules; pull together; take action; from now on；what's worse; is harmful to; think of; keep the voice down; in public; make sure; lie to。
句型：I think… 宾语从句；which引导的定语从句；as long as引导的条件状语从句；we should do表示建议的句子。
