（二）【2020•四川省达州市】

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近年来，全球自然灾害频发，极端天气频频出现，2020年新冠肺炎几乎在全球爆发，环境恶化给全球带来的危害正日益凸显。尽管我国政府出台了一系列环境保护方面的政策，采取了很多措施，成效也很显著，但是，我们还需要付出更多的努力。地球是人类共同的家园，时代的一粒灰， 落在个人头上就是一座山，没有人能独善其身。假如你叫李华，作为达州的学生，应该为环境保护做出哪些贡献呢?请以 “Let’s try our best to protect the environment”为题，向达州的学生发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起，尽最大的努力保护环境!
写作要点:
（1）了解并让更多的人知道环境保护的重要性；
（2）在日常生活中节约用水，节约能源；
（3）为了减少空气污染，最好乘坐公交车、骑自行车或步行上学；
（4）学会垃圾分类:少用塑料袋。
（5）保护野生动物，不食用野生动物。
写作要求:
（1）要点齐全并适当发挥。
（2）全文字数不少于90词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）条理清楚，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。
（4）卷面整洁。
参考词汇；（1） reduce  v.减少  （2） sort garbage  垃圾分类  （3） four categories  （四类垃圾）: recyclable, harmful ,dry and wet waste （4） No business, no killing.没有买卖就没有杀害。
Let’s try our best to protect the environment
Dear friends,
I’ m a student of Grade 9 in Dazhou. My name is Li Hua. As we know, we have only one earth. But in recent years, many disasters happened on the earth and unusual weather appeared very often. Even worse, the novel corona-virus broke out nearly all over the world this year. All these bad things were caused by the terrible environment, but the terrible environment was caused by humans. Although our government has made some policies and taken many useful measures to protect the environment in the past few years, there are still many things to do. As students in Dazhou, what should we do?
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If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best!
A student worrying about the environment
【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“Let’s try our best to protect the environment”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
【参考范文】
Let’s try our best to protect the environment
Dear friends,
I’m a student of Grade 9 in Dazhou. My name is Li Hua. As we know, we have only one earth. But in recent years, many disasters happened on the earth and unusual weather appeared very often. Even worse, the novel corona-virus broke out nearly all over the world this year. All these bad things were caused by the terrible environment, but the terrible environment was caused by humans. Although our government has made some policies and taken many useful measures to protect the environment in the past few years, there are still many things to do. As students in Dazhou, what should we do?
First, we should know and let more people know the importance of environmental protection. Second, we should save water and energy in our daily life. Third, in order to reduce air pollution, it is better to go to school by bus, by bike, on foot or other public transportation instead of using private cars. Fourth, there are four categories of waste: recyclable, harmful, dry and wet waste. We should learn how to sort garbage and use few plastic bags. Fifth, we should protect wild animals and do not eat them.
If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best!
A student worrying about the environment
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态选用一般现在时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点：
短语：all over the world；in our daily life；instead of；better and better等。
句型：First, we should know and let more people know the importance of environmental protection.
Third, in order to reduce air pollution, it is better to go to school by bus, by bike, on foot or other public transportation instead of using private cars.