52.新冠肺炎疫情期间,很多年轻人喜欢上了网上点餐服务。这种订餐方式使人们的生活更加方便快捷,丰富多彩,但同时也存在着不少的弊端。

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52.新冠肺炎疫情期间,很多年轻人喜欢上了网上点餐服务。这种订餐方式使人们的生活更加方便快捷,丰富多彩,但同时也存在着不少的弊端。请根据以下思维导图及要求写一篇英语短文,谈谈网上点餐的利与弊,并阐述你的看法和建议。

 

要求:
(1)语句通顺,意思连贯,可根据提示适当发挥;
(2)词数:80~100(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现学校姓名、地名等与考生本人相关的任何信息。
参考词汇:网上点餐order food online;减少外出reduce going out;规避风险avoid risks;塑料包装plastic packages
With the outbreak of COVID-19, many young people prefer ordering food online.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作思路
本文是一篇材料作文,新冠肺炎疫情期间,很多年轻人喜欢上了网上点餐服务。这种订餐方式使人们的生活更加方便快捷,丰富多彩,但同时也存在着不少的弊端。要求根据所给出思维导图及要求写一篇英语短文,谈谈网上点餐的利与弊,并阐述自己的看法和建议。首先要认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。
参考范文
With the outbreak of COVID-19, many young people prefer ordering food online.
It’s true that ordering food online has many advantages. First of all, it is convenient and can save time. Besides, we can get all kinds of delicious food by shopping online. We can reduce going out. The most important thing is that the food online is always cheaper. However, there are some problems with ordering food online. The quality of the food seems not as good as it is promised. The plastic packages will pollute the environment. In the way, eating habits are not healthy. In addition, it is not good to improve our independence. 
In my opinion, ordering food online should only be used when needed. That’s to say, you may buy things you can’t find in local markets. Besides, people should never rely too much on the Internet.
【名师点评】
1.例文点评:本文紧扣题目要点,内容完整,表述准确,语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。而且还使用了一些较好的句式,为文章增添了不少色彩。
2.高分亮点:
短语:First of all,all kinds of,not as…as,in local,too much,on the Internet。
句型:It’s true that ordering food online has many advantages. 的确,网上订餐有很多优势。that引导宾语从句。
The quality of the food seems not as good as it is promised. 这食物的质量似乎没有它所承诺的那么好。not as…as…不如……,是原级比较。

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