假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Johnson的学生的博客上,看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求,给这位学生回复。

第二节 书面表达
    假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Johnson的学生的博客上,看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求,给这位学生回复。
      I am very self­conscious about my body.After 5 open­heart surgeries,I have a scar down the middle of my chest,and I hate to show it.There are so many cute low­cut tops that my friends wear but I can’t.Swimsuit season is coming and it’s really hard for me to be comfortable in mine,because I know people are looking if it shows.Please,I would like some help.
写作要点:
1.表明自己的看法;
2.陈述自己的理由(可举例说明);
3.提出至少两条建议。
要求:
1.短文词数不少于100;
2.内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯;
3.书写须清晰、工整。
 
 第二节 书面表达  
参考范文:
Dear Johnson,
     I myself have scars all over my back because I got a disease when I was in the 7th grade.For a long time I would never wear bathing suits until one day it just clicked:Nobody is perfect.I know it’s hard for you to be proud of a scar,but the most important thing I can say to you is to just try to be confident! Plus,I don’t know if you’ve noticed,but there are a lot of bathing suits.I really hope that helps and please don’t let anything keep you from feeling beautiful because it is hard to be proud of a scar,it really just demonstrates what an amazing person you are and your real friends shouldn’t care a bit!
Li Hua
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