第一节短文改错 (共10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ˆ）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
“Your future depends on many things, but most on you.” Yes, I can't agree more to this view. It's true that our future determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but their own attitudes, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the masters of our own future.
Take Abraham Lincoln for an example. He was born into a poor family, which only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he then changes not only his own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspired figures in the world.
However, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hand.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ˆ）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
“Your future depends on many things, but most on you.” Yes, I can't agree more to this view. It's true that our future determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but their own attitudes, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the masters of our own future.
Take Abraham Lincoln for an example. He was born into a poor family, which only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he then changes not only his own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspired figures in the world.
However, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hand.
短文改错：
1.most-mostly 2.to-with 3. determined 前加is 4. their-our 5. 去an 6.which-who
7. changes-changed 8. inspired- inspiring 9. However-Therefore/Thus 10.hand-hands
