IV. 短文改错
I will share one experience with you. With the College Entrance Examination draws near, I was filled with great anxiety. Therefore, I couldn’t be absorbed in studies, resulting from my failing in the examination. I got extreme discouraged. Just then, my teacher, Miss Zhang, approached me and said, “It is natural that in life we all have moment when we can’t achieve what we want it. Don’t allow them to weaken you, and turn them into motivation to inspire you. ” Her words were reminder which provided myself with constant encouragement to smile at life. Consequently, I gain what I deserved.
So it is optimistic attitude which matters most of all. It gives you the confident to deal with difficulties and to realize your goals in your life.
短文改错
1. 【解析】第二句中draws改为drawing。考查现在分词。句意: 随着高考的临近, 我非常焦虑。with+宾语+宾语补足语, 在句中作伴随状语。动词draw与宾语the College Entrance Examination构成了主谓关系, 用现在分词drawing。
2. 【解析】第三句中from改为in。考查介词及固定短语。句意: 因此, 我不能全神贯注地学习, 从而导致了我考试失败。result in导致, 结果是, 造成; result from产生于……, 由……引起。
3. 【解析】第四句中extreme改为extremely。考查副词。句意: 我非常沮丧。分析句子可知, 修饰形容词discouraged, 修饰形容词要用副词extremely。
4. 【解析】第五句中moment改为moments。考查名词复数。句意: 在生活中, 我们都有无法获得我们想要东西的时刻。根据背景可知, 生活中有许多这样的时刻。所以moment要用复数形式。
5. 【解析】第五句中去掉第二个it。考查名词性从句及代词。在句子we can’t achieve what we want中, 宾语从句是what we want, want是及物动词, 其宾语是what, 不能再用it。
6. 【解析】第七句中myself改为me。考查代词。句意: 她的话提醒了我( “我”me而不是“我自己”myself), 使我不断地鼓励自己对生活微笑。
7. 【解析】第八句中gain改为gained。考查时态。句意: 我得到了我应得的。根据全文时态可知应用一般过去时。
8. 【解析】第九句中optimistic前加an。考查冠词。句意: 乐观的态度最重要。根据句意可知, 此处应用an表泛指。
9. 【解析】第九句中which改为that。考查强调句。分析句意可知, 本句强调的是该句的主语“an optimistic attitude”(指的是一种乐观的态度); 强调句的结构为“It is/was+强调部分+that/who(只能指人). . . ”。
10. 【解析】第十句中confident改为confidence。考查名词。句意: 它给了你解决困难和实现人生目标的信心。根据句意可知, 此处应用名词。
I will share one experience with you. With the College Entrance Examination draws near, I was filled with great anxiety. Therefore, I couldn’t be absorbed in studies, resulting from my failing in the examination. I got extreme discouraged. Just then, my teacher, Miss Zhang, approached me and said, “It is natural that in life we all have moment when we can’t achieve what we want it. Don’t allow them to weaken you, and turn them into motivation to inspire you. ” Her words were reminder which provided myself with constant encouragement to smile at life. Consequently, I gain what I deserved.
So it is optimistic attitude which matters most of all. It gives you the confident to deal with difficulties and to realize your goals in your life.
短文改错
1. 【解析】第二句中draws改为drawing。考查现在分词。句意: 随着高考的临近, 我非常焦虑。with+宾语+宾语补足语, 在句中作伴随状语。动词draw与宾语the College Entrance Examination构成了主谓关系, 用现在分词drawing。
2. 【解析】第三句中from改为in。考查介词及固定短语。句意: 因此, 我不能全神贯注地学习, 从而导致了我考试失败。result in导致, 结果是, 造成; result from产生于……, 由……引起。
3. 【解析】第四句中extreme改为extremely。考查副词。句意: 我非常沮丧。分析句子可知, 修饰形容词discouraged, 修饰形容词要用副词extremely。
4. 【解析】第五句中moment改为moments。考查名词复数。句意: 在生活中, 我们都有无法获得我们想要东西的时刻。根据背景可知, 生活中有许多这样的时刻。所以moment要用复数形式。
5. 【解析】第五句中去掉第二个it。考查名词性从句及代词。在句子we can’t achieve what we want中, 宾语从句是what we want, want是及物动词, 其宾语是what, 不能再用it。
6. 【解析】第七句中myself改为me。考查代词。句意: 她的话提醒了我( “我”me而不是“我自己”myself), 使我不断地鼓励自己对生活微笑。
7. 【解析】第八句中gain改为gained。考查时态。句意: 我得到了我应得的。根据全文时态可知应用一般过去时。
8. 【解析】第九句中optimistic前加an。考查冠词。句意: 乐观的态度最重要。根据句意可知, 此处应用an表泛指。
9. 【解析】第九句中which改为that。考查强调句。分析句意可知, 本句强调的是该句的主语“an optimistic attitude”(指的是一种乐观的态度); 强调句的结构为“It is/was+强调部分+that/who(只能指人). . . ”。
10. 【解析】第十句中confident改为confidence。考查名词。句意: 它给了你解决困难和实现人生目标的信心。根据句意可知, 此处应用名词。
