A woman crashed her car in an accident to avoid hit a squirrel on the road. The 82-year-old woman we

8、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错 误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A woman crashed her car in an accident to avoid hit a squirrel on the road. The 82-year-old woman were driving along Washington Street toward Cass Avenue in Traverse, Michigan, when she spotted a squirrel cross the road. The woman, whom was driving a 2009 Ford Fusion, hit the side of a parked Honda CR-V, causing his car to flip upside down. A passer-by witness the crash and helped an elderly lady out of the vehicle. Emergency services arrived at the scene examine her. She was escaped with minor injuries. Officers issued her a ticket for driving with due care and cautious.
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A woman crashed her car in an accident to avoid  a squirrel on the road. The 82-year-old woman  driving along Washington Street toward Cass Avenue in Traverse, Michigan, when she spotted a squirrel cross the road. The woman, was driving a 2009 Ford Fusion, hit the side of a parked Honda CR-V, causing  car to flip upside down. A passer-by  the crash and helped  elderly lady out of the vehicle. Emergency services arrived at the scene  examine her. She was escaped with minor injuries. Officers issued her a ticket for driving due care and .

解析:第一处:考査非谓语动词。 avoid doing sth是固定用法,所以用hit的动名词形式hitting。
第二处:考査主谓一致。主语为The 82-year-old woman, 所以谓语动词应用单数形式,故 用 was。
第三处:考丧定语从句的引导词.分析句子成分可知,引导词在定语从句中作主语,故 用 who。
第四处:考查代词。由上下文可知此处是 指这位82岁的老妇人的车翻了,故用her。
第五处:考查时态。此处指“一位路人目睹了撞车事故”,为过去的动作,且根据and 后的helped可知,该句时态为一般过去时。故用witnessed
第六处:考查冠词,此处特指这位老妇人, 故用the。
第七处:考查动间不定式。分析句子成分可知,此处应用动词不定式作目的状语,故用to examine
第八处:考查语态。主语she和escape之 间是主谓关系,故去掉was。
第九处:考查上下文逻辑关系。根据对句子语境的理解可知,此处指因为她驾车时的不小 心和不谨慎,膂察给她开/一张罚单。故用without。 
第十处:考査名词。由and前的名词care可知,这里也应用cautious的名间形式,故用 caution

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