请以"Beautiful China"为题,写一篇作文,描写大美中国,表达我们对祖国的热爱。

五、书面表达(共20分)
12.(20分)我们国家历史悠久,地大物博。有勤劳善良的人民;有绿水青山,美丽的风景;有独特的美食,传统的饮食文化。请以"Beautiful China"为题,写一篇作文,描写大美中国,表达我们对祖国的热爱。
要求:(1)思路清晰,语句通顺,书写规范。
(2)文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息。
(3)词数:80词左右的短文。
                                                                   Beautiful China
分析】【高分句型一】
I am very glad to tell you something about China.
我很高兴告诉你一些关于中国的事情。be glad to do sth高兴做某事。
【高分句型二】
She has many famous places,such as Tian'anmen Square,the Palace Museum,the Great Wall and so on.
她有许多著名的地方,如天安门广场,故宫,长城等等。such as例如,用于具体罗列事例.and so on等等。
解答
Beautiful China
I am very glad to tell you something about China.【高分句型一】(点题)China is in the east of Asia.(地理位置)She is very beautiful.China's national flag is a five﹣starred red flag. (国旗)China's National Day is on October 1st every year. (国庆节)Beijing is the capital city of China.She has many famous places,such as Tian'anmen Square,the Palace Museum,the Great Wall and so on.【高分句型二】They are all beautiful and interesting.Many People visit these places every year and they all love China.(首都及名胜)China is great.I love her.(感受)
Will you visit China one day?Welcome to visit China.Thank you!(表示欢迎)
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文,题目要求围绕提示内容写作,命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识,适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
 
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