Ⅲ.读后续写
(2021届浙江名校联盟9月卷)
It was a beautiful October evening;a cool gentle breeze is blowing as the moon rises high in the sky,and I had gotten home from work about an hour earlier.As I often did after a long day,I went straight to my backyard and did some work in my flower garden before deciding to light the grill to make dinner for my husband and myself.I had only just walked a few steps when I suddenly felt a horrible blow to the right side of my neck.It felt as though someone had hit me with a baseball bat(棒球棒).I knew that no one was in the yard with me,so no one could have hit me.Totally confused,I reached up and,to my shock and horror,realized that I had been shot—with an arrow.
I grabbed the arrow tightly where it had gone through my neck and ran inside,screaming my husband’s name.Ed was in the back of the house talking to our daughter,Keila,on the phone.He dropped the phone and ran to me.Ed grabbed me by the shoulders to stop me from running and told me to lie down on the couch.Then he went to call 911.I lay there and prayed.I didn’t know if there was any way that I could survive.
The next hour or so was crazy,disorderly mix of events.The arrow had come from a young hunter practicing with a compound bow,used for hunting,in his backyard. Luckily,he was using a practice arrow,which is smooth and rounded; a broadhead arrow for hunting would have killed me.He lived across the back street and was shooting to the north.The arrow had bounced and turned back to the south.It went over two,possibly three,fences,through the bushes and an oak tree,between two large hanging baskets,and into my neck as I walked to the grill.A shot from a compound bow can travel up to 200 miles per hour,or 300 feet per second.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Ⅲ.读后续写
One possible version:
Soon,I was sent to the hospital.I could see the worried looks with horror and anxiety on the faces of my family.It was surely frightening since there was an arrow sticking out of my neck! Luckily,I had wonderful doctors and nurses who were perfectly calm and totally focused.Inspired by them,I felt complete peace,firmly believing that everything would be fine.I finally made it and the news spread fast in my community.
The bow hunter paid a visit to me the next day.It turned out that the young hunter who was crazy about thrilling hunting was preparing for the hunting season.Not until the news of accident was broadcast did he realize what a terrible mistake he had made.He confessed,“The excitement and satisfaction through hunting turned into bubbles in a split second!”With great guilt and regret,he made an apology to me.To my joy,this disaster didn’t bring doom and gloom but made me believe the most precious present is life and the love and warmth from family and friends.
(2021届浙江名校联盟9月卷)
It was a beautiful October evening;a cool gentle breeze is blowing as the moon rises high in the sky,and I had gotten home from work about an hour earlier.As I often did after a long day,I went straight to my backyard and did some work in my flower garden before deciding to light the grill to make dinner for my husband and myself.I had only just walked a few steps when I suddenly felt a horrible blow to the right side of my neck.It felt as though someone had hit me with a baseball bat(棒球棒).I knew that no one was in the yard with me,so no one could have hit me.Totally confused,I reached up and,to my shock and horror,realized that I had been shot—with an arrow.
I grabbed the arrow tightly where it had gone through my neck and ran inside,screaming my husband’s name.Ed was in the back of the house talking to our daughter,Keila,on the phone.He dropped the phone and ran to me.Ed grabbed me by the shoulders to stop me from running and told me to lie down on the couch.Then he went to call 911.I lay there and prayed.I didn’t know if there was any way that I could survive.
The next hour or so was crazy,disorderly mix of events.The arrow had come from a young hunter practicing with a compound bow,used for hunting,in his backyard. Luckily,he was using a practice arrow,which is smooth and rounded; a broadhead arrow for hunting would have killed me.He lived across the back street and was shooting to the north.The arrow had bounced and turned back to the south.It went over two,possibly three,fences,through the bushes and an oak tree,between two large hanging baskets,and into my neck as I walked to the grill.A shot from a compound bow can travel up to 200 miles per hour,or 300 feet per second.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Ⅲ.读后续写
One possible version:
Soon,I was sent to the hospital.I could see the worried looks with horror and anxiety on the faces of my family.It was surely frightening since there was an arrow sticking out of my neck! Luckily,I had wonderful doctors and nurses who were perfectly calm and totally focused.Inspired by them,I felt complete peace,firmly believing that everything would be fine.I finally made it and the news spread fast in my community.
The bow hunter paid a visit to me the next day.It turned out that the young hunter who was crazy about thrilling hunting was preparing for the hunting season.Not until the news of accident was broadcast did he realize what a terrible mistake he had made.He confessed,“The excitement and satisfaction through hunting turned into bubbles in a split second!”With great guilt and regret,he made an apology to me.To my joy,this disaster didn’t bring doom and gloom but made me believe the most precious present is life and the love and warmth from family and friends.
