52.假设你是校学生会主席李华。本周五学生会将举办英语演讲比赛，主题是"Hello, 2020!. 现在你代表学生会给外教Tina Young写一封电子邮件，邀请她担任评委。内容包括：
1. 诚挚邀请Tina Young担任评委。
2. 简要说明演讲比赛的目的。
3. 比赛时间、地点:星期五下午两点；学校图书馆二楼会议室。 注意：1.词数：100左右（开头以为你写好，不计入总词数）；
2.不要逐字逐句翻译要点，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Ms. Young,
I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union of our school.
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【答案】Dear Ms. Young,
I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union of our school. I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest. The speech contest is aimed to improve our students’ oral English. It will be held in our school at the conference room on the second floor of the school library on June 15 and it will start at 2:00 pm on Friday and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Hello, 2020!” We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是一封邀请信，你是校学生会主席李华，代表学生会给外教Tina Young写一封电子邮件，邀请她担任英语演讲比赛的评委。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有： invite you to be a judge，English speech contest，at the conference room on the second floor of the school library，start at 2:00 pm on Friday，last for about three hours， deliver their speeches ， accept our invitation
look forward to。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, as well as, not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. 这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句。Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如：last for，deliver their speeches， look forward to。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
1. 诚挚邀请Tina Young担任评委。
2. 简要说明演讲比赛的目的。
3. 比赛时间、地点:星期五下午两点；学校图书馆二楼会议室。 注意：1.词数：100左右（开头以为你写好，不计入总词数）；
2.不要逐字逐句翻译要点，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Ms. Young,
I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union of our school.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Ms. Young,
I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union of our school. I’m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest. The speech contest is aimed to improve our students’ oral English. It will be held in our school at the conference room on the second floor of the school library on June 15 and it will start at 2:00 pm on Friday and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Hello, 2020!” We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是一封邀请信，你是校学生会主席李华，代表学生会给外教Tina Young写一封电子邮件，邀请她担任英语演讲比赛的评委。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有： invite you to be a judge，English speech contest，at the conference room on the second floor of the school library，start at 2:00 pm on Friday，last for about three hours， deliver their speeches ， accept our invitation
look forward to。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, as well as, not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. 这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句。Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如：last for，deliver their speeches， look forward to。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
