52.假如你是高二学生李华，你班交换生Charles即将结束假期从美国返回，你想委托他 为你代购一个剃须刀，作为生日礼物送给爸爸。请按以下要求给他写一封电子邮件。
1. 品牌：Gillette;
2. 价格：30美元左右
参考词汇：剃须刀shaver
要求：1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数：100词左右；
3. 开头和结尾已经给岀，不计入总词数。
Dear Charles,
I haven't seen you for over three weeks.
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Charles,
I haven't seen you for over three weeks. How have you been doing these days? I miss you so much! But it won't be long before we meet again, isn't it?
Charles, could you do me a favor, please? My father's birthday is coming, and I want to give him a shaver as a birthday gift. Just buy me a Gillette about 30 dollars. It is a very famous brand around the world. You can bring it to me when you come back, and I will pay you for that. Thank you very much.
Looking forward to your coming soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，你班交换生Charles即将结束假期从美国返回，你想委托他为你代购一个剃须刀，作为生日礼物送给爸爸。。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 品牌：Gillette;
2. 价格：30美元左右
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
it won't be long ；bring to； pay for； look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I haven't seen you for over three weeks.
2. How have you been doing these days? I miss you so much!
3. But it won't be long before we meet again, isn't it?
4. Charles, could you do me a favor, please?
5. My father's birthday is coming, and I want to give him a shaver as a birthday gift.
6. Just buy me a Gillette about 30 dollars. It is a very famous brand around the world.
7. You can bring it to me when you come back, and I will pay you for that.
8. Thank you very much.
9. Looking forward to your coming soon.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：You can bring it to me when you come back, and I will pay you for that.这句话运用了when引导的时间状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
1. 品牌：Gillette;
2. 价格：30美元左右
参考词汇：剃须刀shaver
要求：1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数：100词左右；
3. 开头和结尾已经给岀，不计入总词数。
Dear Charles,
I haven't seen you for over three weeks.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Charles,
I haven't seen you for over three weeks. How have you been doing these days? I miss you so much! But it won't be long before we meet again, isn't it?
Charles, could you do me a favor, please? My father's birthday is coming, and I want to give him a shaver as a birthday gift. Just buy me a Gillette about 30 dollars. It is a very famous brand around the world. You can bring it to me when you come back, and I will pay you for that. Thank you very much.
Looking forward to your coming soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，你班交换生Charles即将结束假期从美国返回，你想委托他为你代购一个剃须刀，作为生日礼物送给爸爸。。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 品牌：Gillette;
2. 价格：30美元左右
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
it won't be long ；bring to； pay for； look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I haven't seen you for over three weeks.
2. How have you been doing these days? I miss you so much!
3. But it won't be long before we meet again, isn't it?
4. Charles, could you do me a favor, please?
5. My father's birthday is coming, and I want to give him a shaver as a birthday gift.
6. Just buy me a Gillette about 30 dollars. It is a very famous brand around the world.
7. You can bring it to me when you come back, and I will pay you for that.
8. Thank you very much.
9. Looking forward to your coming soon.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：You can bring it to me when you come back, and I will pay you for that.这句话运用了when引导的时间状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
