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I was made our school football team’s captain for the final game. My entirely family showed up to support me. The only person which wouldn’t be there to watch me were my father. He has been working overseas for a few year. And I understood how my dad couldn’t be here for them. But when my father heard about the game, he was determined to surprise me. After the announcer told me to turn back just before a game, I was shocking to see my father there. Then he gave to me a big hug and told me how proud he was of me. It was the first time I hugged my dad.
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I was made our school football team’s captain for the final game. My entirely family showed 
71.entire
up to support. The only person which wouldn’t be there to support me were my father. He has 
72.that/who                       73.was
been working overseas for a few year. And I understood how my dad couldn’t be here for them. 
74.years             75.why                     76.me
But when my father heard about the game, he was determined to surprise me. After the announcer 
told me to turn back just before a game, I was shocking to see my father there. Then he gave to 
77.the        78.shocked                             79         
me a big hug and told me how proud he was of me. It was the first time I︿ hugged my dad.
                              80. had
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