This evening I went to Jim’s house to sing with some of my good friend, and we really had a happily

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This evening I went to Jim’s house to sing with some of my good friend, and we really had a happily time.
It was because of I got a bad score in the math exam that I had been in a low mood for the whole afternoon. But finally, I accepted Jim’s invitation. It was the first time that I have sung with my friends. All my friends enjoy singing, while I didn’t dare to show my voice. I was afraid I couldn’t sing well. After while, my friends noticed this. With our encouragement, I picked up the microphone and sang an English songs, whose name is “ I believe I can fly”. With the song went on, I cheered up and recovered my confidence gradual.
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This evening I went to Jim’s house to sing with some of my good friend, and we really had a happily time.                                     friends
       happy                             
It was because of I got a bad score in the math exam that I had been in a low mood
             去掉of
 for the whole afternoon. But finally, I accepted Jim’s invitation. It was the first time [来源:学科网ZXXK]
 
that I have sung with my friends. All my friends enjoy singing, while I didn’t dare to
      had                              enjoyed
show my voice. I was afraid I couldn’t sing well. After while, my friends noticed this.
                                      after a while
With our encouragement, I picked up the microphone and sang an English songs,
    their                                                     song
whose name is “ I believe I can fly”. With the song went on, I cheered up and recovered my confidence gradual.              going
                  gradually

 
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