It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who wo

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   It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said,“The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well.”Immediate, I raised my hand.
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43.第一句:begin改为begun 考查动词的时态。此处为过去完成时,过去完成时的结构为“had+过去分词”,而begin的过去分词为begun。
44.第二句:wait改为waiting 考查非谓语动词。本句主干为Everyone was silent,主系表结构完整,所以此处的wait应用非谓语动词形式。everyone与wait 之间为逻辑上的主动关系,因此用现在分词waiting作伴随状语。
45.第二句:and改为or 考查连词。根据句意可知应该是读他“或”她的段落。前后之间是选择关系,原文中的and没有选择意义。
46.第三句:eager后加to 考查动词不定式。be eager to do sth.渴望做某事。
47.第四句:myself改为my或the 考查代词或冠词。do one’s homework为固定短语,意为“做作业”,homework前应该加形容词性物主代词,原文中的myself是反身代词。do the homework也可表示“做作业”。
48.第五句:去掉that 考查固定结构。be afraid to do sth.意为“不敢做某事”,that是多余的。
49.第五句:larger改为large 考查形容词原级。原句中并没有比较的含义,所以应该把比较级larger改为原级large,构成a large group of people“一大群人”。
50.第六句:include改为includes 考查时态和主谓一致。此处讲的是客观事实,应用一般现在时。主语that指代前面的动名词learning,是单数概念,因此谓语动词要用第三人称单数形式。
51.第六句:mistake改为mistakes 考查名词单复数。此处表示“学习包括从教科书中学习,也包括从错误中学习”。根据句意可知,“错误”应该不止一个,所以要用该词的复数形式。mistake是可数名词。
52.第七句:Immediate改为Immediately 考查副词。此处应该用副词作状语,来修饰后面的“I raised my hand”。

 
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