She had been shopping with her Mom in Wal-Mart. She must have been 6 years old, who had this beautif

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She had been shopping with her Mom in Wal-Mart. She must have been 6 years old, who had this beautiful brown haired image of innocence. Honestly speaking, outside, it was pouring so heavily. 
    We all stood there under the awning(雨篷) and just inside the door of the Wal-Mart. We all waited, some patiently, others annoyed, because nature messed up their hurried day. I am always very interested in rainfall. As a result, I got lost in the sound and sight of the heavens which could wash away the dirt and dust of the world. I recalled my childhood which was about my memory when I used to run and splash(溅水). It's a great relief from my day's worries.
Her voice was so sweet that it broke the situation in which everyone seemed to be asleep. “Mom, let’s run through the rain.” she said.
“What did you say?” Mom asked.
“Let’s run through the rain!” She repeated.
“No, honey. We will wait until it slows down a bit. You see, it is pouring.” Mom replied.
This young child waited about another minute and repeated: “Mom, let’s run through the rain.”
“We'll get wet through if we do. What’s more, I am worried that you might catch a cold.” Mom said.
“No, we won't, Mom. That is not what you said this morning.” the young girl said as she pulled at her Mom’s arm hard.
“This morning? When did I say we could run through the rain and not get wet?”
“Don’t you remember? When you were talking to Daddy about his cancer, you said. If God can get us through this, he can get us through anything!”
The entire crowd stopped dead silent. I swear you couldn’t hear anything but the rain. We all stood silently. No one came or left in the next few minutes. Mom paused and was thinking for a moment about what she would say.
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Now some would laugh it off and scold her for being silly.
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We all stood watching, smiling and laughing as they rushed past the cars.
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Now some would laugh it off and scold her for being silly. Some might even ignore what was said. But this was a moment worth approval in a young child's life. A time when innocent trust can be protected so that it will bloom into faith. “Honey, you are absolutely right. Let’s run through the rain. If we get wet, well maybe we just needed washing.” Mom said. Then off they ran.
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We all stood watching, smiling and laughing as they rushed past the cars. They held their shopping bags over their heads just in case. They got wet through. But they were followed by a few who screamed and laughed like children all the way to their cars. And yes, I did. I ran. I got wet. I needed washing. Circumstances or people can take away your material possessions. They can take away your money, and they can take away your health. But no one can ever take away your precious memories. So, don’t forget to make time and take the opportunities to make memories every day!

 
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