76.社会不断在发展进步,成绩好已经不再是衡量一个好学生的唯一标准。某校正在开展 “走进新时代,争当合格中学生”的大讨论

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76.社会不断在发展进步,成绩好已经不再是衡量一个好学生的唯一标准。某校正在开展 “走进新时代,争当合格中学生”的大讨论,以 “We act, we improve” 为主题,写一篇演讲稿,谈谈你觉得除了学习课本知识之外,我们还应该做些什么?提示如下:
At school 1. 培养良好的阅读习惯,提升自己;
2. 与人合作,积极参加课外活动;
3. ……
At home 1. 尊敬长辈,……;
2.  ……
In public 1.懂餐桌礼仪,……;
2. ……
 
要求 1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;   
2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;  
3)词数:100词左右(信的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
We act, we improve
With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified(合格的) middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.
                                                                                                
                                                                                                
                                                                                                
                                                                                                
                                                                                                
                                                                                                
【答案】
We act, we improve
With the development of the society, to learn well is not the only thing a student should do. To be a qualified(合格的) middle school student, I think we have a lot of things to do.
In my opinion, I think in school, we need to develop good reading habits and improve ourselves. And we should cooperate with others and we participate in after-school activities with classmates actively .It is important for us to be polite to our teachers and classmates.
At home, we should respect our elders and do some housework for our parents. When parents are in a bad mood, you can tell them some jokes to make them happy.
In public, we need to pay attention to table manners and be polite .We should not speak loudly in public and influence others .We can improve ourselves in every way.

解析
1.题干解读:该题目要求包含表格里的内容,写出在学校、在家及在公众场合的内容,且每点要添加几点,注意合乎情理。
2.例文点评:例文通过对学校、家、公众场合里的每一点都进行了一一讲述。语句通顺,条理清晰,词组,短语,句型等运用灵活。
3.高分亮点:词组:In my opinion;improve ourselves;cooperate with others;respect our elders;do some housework;in a bad mood;make them happy;pay attention to;table manners等;
句型:In my opinion, I think in school, we need to develop good reading habits and improve ourselves./It is important for us to be polite to our teachers and classmates./When parents are in a bad mood, you can tell them some jokes to make them happy./We should not speak loudly in public and influence others.

 
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