七、话题作文（共20分)
76．文明礼貌从我做起，从现在开始，从点滴小事做起。请根据下面的提示和要求，以 “When to Say Thank You”为题，写一篇短文。
提示:1) When should we say “thank you” at home?
2) When are we supposed to say “thank you” at school?
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要求:1) 短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当发挥。
2) 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3) 词数80个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
参考词汇:wash, encourage, open
When to Say Thank You
It’s polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to us.
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【答案】
When to Say Thank You
It’s polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to us.Being polite is a good tradition in our country.Nobody likes a person who is impolite.It’s important for us to be polite.We should say “thank you” to parents when they cook for us.We should say “thank you” when they wash clothes for us.We should also be polite at school.When the teachers help us work out questions ,we should say “thank you” to them.When we get bad grades and the teachers and classmates encourage us,we should say “thank you”.When someone open the door for us,we should say “thank you”.We should say “thank you” as often as possible.If everyone is polite to others,the world will be more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇要求介绍我们在家和在学校怎么做个有礼貌的人。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
重点短语和句型：say “thank you” to sb 对某人说“谢谢”，it’s+形容词+for sb to do sth 做某事对某人来说怎么样，help sb do sth帮助某人做某事，as often as possible尽可能经常的。