假如你叫Jack,你的笔友Amy 想了解你的日常生活情况,请根据以下提示,给你的笔友写一封信,谈一谈你的情况。70词左右。

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假如你叫Jack,你的笔友Amy 想了解你的日常生活情况,请根据以下提示,给你的笔友写一封信,谈一谈你的情况。70词左右。
提示:1) 起床5:40,早饭6:30, 上学7:30;
2) 上午上4节课,12:00吃午饭;
3) 下午上2节课,4:00做运动,打篮球, 踢足球;
4) 下午5:30回家,做作业;
5) 晚上6:30吃晚饭;9:00左右睡觉。
Dear Amy,
I'm writing to you to tell you about my daily (日常的) life.__________________
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           Yours,
Jack   
 
范文:
Dear Amy,
I'm writing to you to tell you about my daily(日常的) life. I usually get up at 5:40.Then I have breakfast at 6:30.After__breakfast, I go to school at 7:30.I have four classes in the morning and I have lunch at twelve. I have two classes in the afternoon. I play sports at four o'clock. I__often__play__basketball__and__soccer__with__my__friends. I get__home at 5:30.Then I do my homework first. I have dinner with my parents at 6:30.I go to bed at about nine o'clock. What about you? Please__write__to__me__and__tell__me__about_
your__day
Yours,
Jack
点评:①处使用表示谈论活动顺序的after 自然、恰当。②处句子结构完整,语法正确,显示了写作能力。③处get后不能使用to, 因为home是副词。英语中的一些习惯用法在写作中要准确记忆。④处回应了开头,使首尾呼应,这是文章的添彩之笔。
 
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