If there was one thing you could make parents understand about kids,what would it be? That is one of

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    If there was one thing you could make parents understand about kids,what would it be? That is one of the questions TFK and KidsHealth.org recently asked in an anonymous(匿名的) survey conducted online.More than 8,000 kids answered.“We just want to spend time with you,” said a 12-year-old child.“At 13,you can't treat me like I'm 6,”another kid said. An 11-year-old child wrote,“Being a kid is a lot harder than it looks.” The kids who took our survey made it clear that they want to feel close to the important people in their life—their mum,dad and other caring adults.But their answers also show that it is not always easy to deal with these close relationships.
   Many kids—two out of three—said they get along pretty well or very well with their parents.About four out of five kids told us that they have fun with their parents.But that doesn't mean they never disagree.In fact,most kids reported arguing with their parents,at least sometimes.“It's absolutely normal to disagree and argue,” says D'Arcy Lyness,a child psychologist.“But it's also important to learn how to do so respectfully.” About half of the kids said they are doing that.When they disagree with their parents,they say they discuss issues calmly.
   But two out of five kids said arguments tend to involve yelling at each other.Lyness points out that shouting never helps.“Speak up,and let your parents know your ideas and your opinions,” she advises.“But be patient.Don't use a raised,angry voice.”
Kids made it clear that they would rather avoid conflict altogether.Not surprisingly,three out of four kids admitted lying at times.Many said they lie to avoid getting in trouble or disappointing their parents.According to Lyness,lying isn't just wrong.It can actually get negative results.Telling the truth builds trust.“When parents can trust you,they are more likely to give you more freedom and more privileges,” she says.

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   A recent survey shows that most kids want to feel close to the important people in their life.(要点1) However, it is not always easy to deal with these close relationships.(要点2) Many kids can get along well with parents, but sometimes they disagree, which is absolutely normal.(要点3) When facing conflict, speaking up can help, but being patient is very important.(要点4) However, kids would rather avoid conflict by telling lies.(要点5)

 
 
   A recent survey shows that most kids want to feel close to the important people in their life, but it is difficult to deal with/ handle these close relationships.(要点1) While many kids can get along well with parents, sometimes they disagree.(要点2) Although disagreement is definitely normal, kids should settle it in a respectful and calm way. (要点3) When facing conflict, speaking up can help, but being patient rather than yelling/ shouting is very important.(要点4) Meanwhile, to avoid conflict, kids had better tell the truth instead of lying, which can benefit them.(要点5)  ( 修改后的版本)
 
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