4.【2018年黑龙江省绥化市中考】身为中学生,关爱儿童是我们应尽的义务。本周六我班将组织一次去儿童福利院(the children's home)看望儿童的活动。

4.【2018年黑龙江省绥化市中考】身为中学生,关爱儿童是我们应尽的义务。本周六我班将组织一次去儿童福利院(the children's home)看望儿童的活动。请你为本次活动制定计划,写一篇不少于80词的短文。
内容包括:出发时间,集合地点,出行方式以及在儿童福利院的具体活动安排。
提示词;tell stories, sing and dance, cheer up
要求:1.参考提示内容可适当发挥。
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整。
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息。(姓名、校名、地名等)
答案】We are going to the children's home to  visit the children there  this weekend. We’ll meet
at the school gate at eight on Saturday  morning. Then we’ll go there on our school bus. What should we do at the children's home? Here are our plans.
First, we'll take some gifts to them, such as colored pencils, books and some toys. Second at the children's home, we'll draw pictures with them, read stories to them and help with their lessons. Last, we'll have a party. We can sing and dance together. We can also play games with them and tell jokes to cheer them up.
I'm sure they'll enjoy the time with us.

 
点睛:这篇短文使用了大量的固定短语,为文章增色不少,如such as ,have a party , play games,tell stories, sing and dance, cheer up等;First, Second,Last等的运用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理;同时语言流畅,内容完整,是一篇不错的范文。
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