假如你是晨光中学的学生李华,平时坚持用英语写日记.请根据以下要点,描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情,并表达自己的想法.

(一)【2019 •天津市】
假如你是晨光中学的学生李华,平时坚持用英语写日记.请根据以下要点,描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情,并表达自己的想法.
(l)一个男孩不舒服,开始呕吐,一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面,男孩表达感谢.
(2)地铁到站,有人挤向座位,有人下不去车,有人因此争吵.
(3)你认为……
参考词汇:  开始呕吐  begin to vomit;挤向座位  push towards the seat;争吵 have a quarrel
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个;
(2)日记格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home from school, I noticed ____________________________________
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写作思路
在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.
参考范文
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home from school, I noticed two things around me.(开篇点明题意)
The first thing I met is about a boy.The boy didn't feel well.He began to vomit.A beautiful girl saw the boy.She helped him clean the floor【高分句型一】.Then the boy thanked her for helping.The second thing is about the underground.When the underground got to the station.a lot of people pushed towards the seat.So some people couldn't get off the underground.Some had a quarreel because of this.(介绍碰到的两件事情)
In my opinion,The girl did a good thing and we appreciated her action in this society.As for the underground.It shows your quality there.If you wait in a line,others will get off the underground easily.If all of us can do in this way,our world will be more beautiful【高分句型二】.(表达自己的观点结尾)

【名师点评】
(1)高分句型一:
She helped him clean the floor.
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事。这句话意为:她帮助他打扫干净地面。
(2)高分句型二:
If all of us can do in this way,our world will be more beautiful.
If引导的条件状语从句,遵循"主将从现"原则,即主句用一般将来时,从句用一般现在时态。这句话意为:如果我们所有人都这样做,我们的世界将会变得更加美好。

 
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