9．（2018·江西省中考真题）
假如国外中学生来你校进行为期一周的交流学习,期间计划参加一项中国传统文化的主题活动,为此向你们征求活动方案(plan)请你根据下面表格中的信息提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍你提供的活动方案,内容包括:茶或者民乐介绍,活动安排以及与之相关的理由。
要求:1.从表格中任选一个主题,合理安排活动;
2.短文条理清楚,行文连贯,内容可适当发挥;
3.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
4.词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, friends. I've got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture. First of all, I'd like to introduce _________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
Hope you will have a good time.
【答案】例文：
Hello, friends. I've got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture. First of all, I'd like to introduce tea. It has a long history. It is said that Shen Nong discovered it as a drink. Tea is one of the most popular drinks in China. So we will have some interesting activities about it for you.
On Saturday morning, you are going to visit a big farm where you can learn about tea processing. On Saturday afternoon, you are going to a tea house after dinner where you can watch a tea art performance.
Why do we plan a visit to a tea house for you? Because you can learn a lot more about tea culture there. You will see a young lady in a Chinese traditional dress who shows you how a cup of tea is made with tea sets. You can enjoy it and relax yourselves while listening to pieces of traditional folk music.
Hope you will have a good time.
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如help sb. do，about Chinese culture，I'd like to，one of the most popular drinks，be going to，after dinner，a lot more，be made with，listen to，have a good time等。而It is said that Shen Nong discovered it as a drink. Tea is one of the most popular drinks in China./ You will see a young lady in a Chinese traditional dress who shows you how a cup of tea is made with tea sets,/ You can enjoy it and relax yourselves while listening to pieces of traditional folk music.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。
点评：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
假如国外中学生来你校进行为期一周的交流学习,期间计划参加一项中国传统文化的主题活动,为此向你们征求活动方案(plan)请你根据下面表格中的信息提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍你提供的活动方案,内容包括:茶或者民乐介绍,活动安排以及与之相关的理由。
要求:1.从表格中任选一个主题,合理安排活动;
2.短文条理清楚,行文连贯,内容可适当发挥;
3.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
4.词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
| Chinese Culture | Introduction | Schedule | Reasons |
| Tea | Past and present | Time:______ Places: tea farm, tea house Activities: 1. tea processing 2. a tea art performance |
… |
| Folk Music | Music pieces and traditional instruments |
Time:_______ Places: music room, school hall Activities: 1. take musical instrument classes 2. attend a folk music concert |
… |
Hello, friends. I've got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture. First of all, I'd like to introduce _________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
Hope you will have a good time.
【答案】例文：
Hello, friends. I've got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture. First of all, I'd like to introduce tea. It has a long history. It is said that Shen Nong discovered it as a drink. Tea is one of the most popular drinks in China. So we will have some interesting activities about it for you.
On Saturday morning, you are going to visit a big farm where you can learn about tea processing. On Saturday afternoon, you are going to a tea house after dinner where you can watch a tea art performance.
Why do we plan a visit to a tea house for you? Because you can learn a lot more about tea culture there. You will see a young lady in a Chinese traditional dress who shows you how a cup of tea is made with tea sets. You can enjoy it and relax yourselves while listening to pieces of traditional folk music.
Hope you will have a good time.
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如help sb. do，about Chinese culture，I'd like to，one of the most popular drinks，be going to，after dinner，a lot more，be made with，listen to，have a good time等。而It is said that Shen Nong discovered it as a drink. Tea is one of the most popular drinks in China./ You will see a young lady in a Chinese traditional dress who shows you how a cup of tea is made with tea sets,/ You can enjoy it and relax yourselves while listening to pieces of traditional folk music.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。
点评：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
