某英文网站正在举办以“My School Life”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。

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某英文网站正在举办以“My School Life”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容要点 参考词汇
Subjects English, Science,...
Teachers/Classmates kind, helpful,...
Activities sports, hobbies,...
 
注意:1. 文中必须包括表格中全部内容要点,可适当发挥,参考词汇仅供选择使用;
       2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;
       3. 词数:80—100;
       4. 短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My School Life
I’m Li Hua from Sunny Hill Middle School in China. I’d like to share my school life with you. ___________
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写作思路
这是一篇给材料作文。某英文网站正在举办以“My School Life”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。在写作时,注意连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。
参考范文
My School Life
I’m Li Hua from Sunny Hill Middle School in China. I’d like to share my school life with you.
We have many subjects at school such as Chinese, English and so on. I am focused more on Chinese, for I think it’s getting more and more widely used throughout the world. Our teachers are kind and helpful. Whenever I have problems, they are always ready to give me a hand.
School activities are rich and colorful. I often play basketball with my classmates, which brings me lots of fun. I like reading as well. So I often spend my free time reading in the school library.
My school life is wonderful and I enjoy it very much.

【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
I often play basketball with my classmates,which brings me lots of fun.
我经常和我的同学打篮球,这给我带来了很多乐趣。which引导非限定性定语从句。
【高分句型二】
So I often spend my free time reading in the school library.
所以我经常花我的空闲时间在学校图书馆阅读。spend…doing sth花费……做某事。
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