第二节：书面表达（满分25分）
9．（25分）假定你是李华，正在加拿大访学．你看到杂志上有一篇介绍中国端午节的文章，发现文中配图是赛艇而不是龙舟．请你给编辑部写一封信，内容包括：
要点如下：
1． 赞赏对方介绍中国文化；
2． 指出错误；
3． 希望更正；
4． 词数100左右．
参考词汇：赛艇 ﹣ rowing boat 龙舟 ﹣ dragon boat
【考点】R1：提纲类．菁优网版权所有
【分析】略
【解答】【答案】Dear Sir，
I am Li Hua， a visiting student from China． I'm writing to voice my opinion on your article about the Chinese Dragon Boat Festival．
I'm much grateful to you for sharing our Chinese culture by introducing Dragon Boat Festival to your people， which will definitely bridge the gap between us two countries． However： I found a flaw in die picture that goes with the article． Actually， we don't compete with your familiar rowing boats but dragon boats because dragons are considered as a symbol of our Chinese culture． I sincerely hope you can revise the boat information so that readers will have a better understanding of China．
Thank you in advance for the efforts you will make．
【分析】
考查应用文中的书信写作．
【详解】题目要求假定你是李华，正在加拿大访学．你看到杂志上有一篇介绍中国端午节的文章，发现文中配图是赛艇而不是龙舟．请你给编辑部写一封信，内容包括：要点如下：1． 赞赏对方介绍中国文化；2． 指出错误；3． 希望更正；4． 词数100左右．分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作．要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出．描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述．还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯．
【点睛】这篇书信类短文的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采．I'm much grateful to you for sharing our Chinese culture by introducing Dragon Boat Festival to your people， which will definitely bridge the gap between us two countries．定语从句的运用；I sincerely hope you can revise the boat information so that readers will have a better understanding of China．宾语从句的运用．
【点评】略
9．（25分）假定你是李华，正在加拿大访学．你看到杂志上有一篇介绍中国端午节的文章，发现文中配图是赛艇而不是龙舟．请你给编辑部写一封信，内容包括：
要点如下：
1． 赞赏对方介绍中国文化；
2． 指出错误；
3． 希望更正；
4． 词数100左右．
参考词汇：赛艇 ﹣ rowing boat 龙舟 ﹣ dragon boat
【考点】R1：提纲类．菁优网版权所有
【分析】略
【解答】【答案】Dear Sir，
I am Li Hua， a visiting student from China． I'm writing to voice my opinion on your article about the Chinese Dragon Boat Festival．
I'm much grateful to you for sharing our Chinese culture by introducing Dragon Boat Festival to your people， which will definitely bridge the gap between us two countries． However： I found a flaw in die picture that goes with the article． Actually， we don't compete with your familiar rowing boats but dragon boats because dragons are considered as a symbol of our Chinese culture． I sincerely hope you can revise the boat information so that readers will have a better understanding of China．
Thank you in advance for the efforts you will make．
Yours．
Li Hua
【解析】Li Hua
【分析】
考查应用文中的书信写作．
【详解】题目要求假定你是李华，正在加拿大访学．你看到杂志上有一篇介绍中国端午节的文章，发现文中配图是赛艇而不是龙舟．请你给编辑部写一封信，内容包括：要点如下：1． 赞赏对方介绍中国文化；2． 指出错误；3． 希望更正；4． 词数100左右．分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作．要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出．描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述．还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯．
【点睛】这篇书信类短文的关键在于要点的拓展，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采．I'm much grateful to you for sharing our Chinese culture by introducing Dragon Boat Festival to your people， which will definitely bridge the gap between us two countries．定语从句的运用；I sincerely hope you can revise the boat information so that readers will have a better understanding of China．宾语从句的运用．
【点评】略
