阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.续写的词数应为150左右Sam Watts was a 37-year-old fisherman living and Wo

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文.续写的词数应为150左右.
Sam Watts was a 37-year-old fisherman living and Working in Canada.One day,Sam planned to head out into the Pacific at 9 am and work straight through until 5pm the next day.Joining Sam would be his crewman,24-year-old Tom Buck.
Although Sam had been warned that a storm was coming,there was little that would keep him from going.As he sailed through the waves some 120 kilometers from land,Sam let out his three-kilometer-long fishing line. The storm was gaining strength on land but had yet to reach the men far offshore.That changed around 1 am.Waves rocked the small boat,which began to turn sideways like an amusement park ride."Get us out of here!"Tom screamed to Sam."Let's go back!"
With the winds and waves kicking up,the boat began to fill with water.Sam and Tom tried to pull in the fishing line together,but the high waves filled the boat with water,forcing Sam to make a hard desicion.He cut the line,losing thousands of dollars'worth of equipment and fish in the sea.He then pointed the boat toward a port five hours away.Sam then called his boss,William Fox,to report his position.
With dawn coming,Sam spotted the rise of the mountains on the horizon.He was figuring out a route through the dangerous waters when suddenly the motor stopped."I couldn't believe it,"Sam said."We were 24 kilometers off the coast,and the motor died."High waves raised and dropped the boat,sending the men crashing into the sides."William,William!"Sam yelled into the radio."If you're coming to get me,come now!"
"We're coming!"William shouted back.
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Shortly after,the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore,driving the men farther out to sea._______
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The next morning,Stun spotted a fishing boat in the distance.________
 
【答案】
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       Shortly after, the radio died and the wind continued to blow straight offshore, driving the men farther out to sea. They had been drifting for hours. After what seemed a century, suddenly Sam shouted and pointed at a nearby place, "Look! There is an island!" Sam and Tom quickly jumped into the sea, which became calmer, and they managed to land on the island. (高分句型一)They were surprised to find that there were people living on it. The people there gave them some food. The storm seemed to be over and they had a good sleep that night.(要点1 他们找到了小岛)
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       The next morning. Sam spotted a fishing boat in the distance. It belonged to the people on the island. These kind people gave the boat to Sam as a present and warned him that the storm would come back again in two days, so he must hurry up! (高分句型二)Sam thanked them and set off on the route he had planned. After two days' sailing, they finally reached the coast. At that time, Sam's radio rang: T'm William! I'm in the middle of the sea. The storm is rocking my boat terribly. Help me!"      (要点2 好心人给了他们小船)
 

【解析】
 
本篇书面表达是读后续写,要求根据所给情节进行续写.第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一 个完整的故事注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150词左右; 2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
高分句型一:
Sam and Tom quickly jumped into the sea, which became calmer, and they managed to land on the island. 萨姆和汤姆很快跳进了海中,海变得更平静了,他们设法在岛上着陆.使用了which引导的定语从句.
高分句型二:
These kind people gave the boat to Sam as a present and warned him that the storm would come back again in two days, so he must hurry up! 这些好心的人把船作为礼物送给萨姆,并警告他风暴将在两天后再次来临,所以他必须快点!运用了and连接的并列句以及that引导的宾语从句.
英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

 
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