书面表达(七)
 
请根据下面的提示写一篇不少于60词的作文，描述一下你的朋友Bob一家人使用交通工具的情况。
1)Bob的学校离家大约有6公里，他通常骑自行车去上学，下雨时坐公共汽车。
2)父亲在医院(hospital)工作，医院离家很远，每天开车去上班，大约花费40分钟。
3)母亲是一名老师，学校离家很近，常步行去上班，花费5分钟。
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范文：
I have a good friend. His name is Bob. It's about 6 kilometers from his home to school. So he usually goes__to__school__by__bike^①. He takes__the__bus^② when it rains.
His father works in a hospital. The hospital is far from his home. His father drives his car to work. It__takes__him__about__40__minutes__to__get__there__every__day^③．
His mother is a teacher. She teaches in a school. The school is near her home, so she usually goes to work on foot. It takes her about 5 minutes.
点评：①②处分别使用了不同的句式表达乘坐某种交通工具，结构正确且避免了呆板。③处句子结构简练，语法正确，显示了熟练驾驭文字的能力。整篇文章层次清晰，语言灵活多变，语法正确，结构匀称，写得不错。