Dear Adler, I'm writing to express my sincere thank to you. First of all, during my stay in you

第一节 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每 句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Adler,
I'm writing to express my sincere thank to you. First of all, during my stay in your house I could always feel your warmth, which has made my brief stay pleasantly. I'm missing your delicious dinner that you cook specially for me.
What's worse, the beauty of American campus and the variety of school activities have impressed me and appealed me. Here is a Chinese knot meaning for you, a symbol of friendship, peace or love in China. With this gift, I wish you a good health and great happiness. Finally I'd like to invite you to visit China where you know is worth a visit.
Look forward to your reply at my convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
第一处:名词单复数错误。此处表示"感谢",应用名词复数thankso
第二处:形容词错误。此处用形容词作宾补表示"令人愉快的",补 充说明宾语stay的状态。
第三处:时态错误。根据语境可知,cook这一动作是发生在过去 的,故应用一般过去时。
第四处:逻辑关系错误。What's worse "更糟糕的是",what's more "此 外,更有甚者"。根据语境可知,此处用moreo
第五处:介词漏用。appeal to sb.为固定搭配,表示"对 有吸引力,引起……兴趣"。
第六处:非谓语动词错误。mean在此处作动词表示”打算,意欲, 有 的目的",构成be meant for sb.结构,表示为"某人而准备的"。故用meanto
第七处:并列连词错误。根据句意可知,此处表示中国结在中国象征着友谊、和平和爱,表示并列关系。
第八处:冠词多用。health与happiness均是不可数名词,且此处表 示泛指,故不与冠词连用。
第九处:关系词错误。分析句子结构可知,此处用关系代词引导定 语从句,先行词是China,关系词在从句中作主语,you know是插 入语,故用which/thato
第十处:代词错误。根据句意可知,此处表示"在你方便的时候"。

 
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