假如你是Kim,请给你最想交流的人写一封信,介绍你某一学科的一次考试,包括考前、考中和考后的感受。

八、书面表达(共1题,20
假如你是Kim,请给你最想交流的人写一封信,介绍你某一学科的一次考试,包括考前、考中和考后的感受。
提示:1. 请补全横线上的称谓;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名;
3. 词数在100词左右,开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
八、书面表达
    Possible version 1
Dear Carol,
I’m writing to tell you about my English exam. You know I’m not good at English. I find it difficult. My English teacher advised me to listen to something interesting and do more exercises. I did what she told me and made progress. We had an English exam last week. I was very nervous when I was doing my test paper. But I tried to keep my cool and did very carefully. For the first time I did well. I’m so happy and I feel successful now. I want to share my happiness with you. Let’s help each other.
Yours,
Kim                                                                    
Possible version 2
Dear mum and dad,
   I’m writing to tell you about my math exam. I’m sorry I failed again. Before the test, I didn’t sleep well, and I had a headache. So when the test began the next day, I felt a little nervous and didn’t do very well. After the exam the teacher talked to me, and I promised him to work harder. I will make good use of time and listen carefully in class. I’ll ask the teacher for help after class. Please don’t be angry. I’m sure I’ll improve my math quickly. Believe me and I can fly.
                                                          Yours,
                                                           Kim
 (二) 评分说明:
  要求考生用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语,完整准确地表述所提示的内容,书写工整。本题共20分,分四档评分:
    1、短文通顺完整,表达清楚, 语言基本无误,17-20分;
2、短文较通顺完整,表达基本清楚,语言有少量错误,12-16分;
3、能写明基本要点,短文不够通顺完整,语言有较多错误,但尚能达意,6-11分;
4、仅能写明部分要点,短文不完整,语言错误多,影响意思表达,0-5分。

 
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